Comments | kanedax: Five and a Half Years Later: One Cold Night In February (2/2)

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Five and a Half Years Later: One Cold Night In February (2/2)

Oct 07, 2007 10:12

Title: Five and a Half Years Later: One Cold Night In February (2/2)
Author: kanedax
Spoilers: Deathly Hallows & Previous Chapters
Characters: H/G, R/Hr, N/L, and many others
Rating: Hard R for language, nudity, and sex
Summary: Neville and Luna get interrupted
Notes: This one was fun to write. The whole world of post-DH Potterverse is growing beneath ( Read more... )

adult, potter, fanfic, aftertheflaw

Comments 55

crumplehornedki October 8 2007, 02:36:59 UTC

Neville and Luna are hilarious. I wondered where you were going with this at first but I really enjoyed it.

kanedax October 8 2007, 13:11:10 UTC

I love turning the story in a complete 180. The reactions that I got from my friend where I said "yeah, I'm going to write a chapter that starts with porn and ends with James being born."

"Sooooo... what? Are you going to have Ginny go into labor while having sex with Harry?"

silveroonmyst October 8 2007, 07:12:39 UTC

I really really like the last part, Very touching.
And i have to say, so nice of Ginny not to cuss everyone out hehe. She was far too nice lol.

kanedax October 8 2007, 13:06:05 UTC

My guess is that she was cussing everyone else out earlier in the labor. By that point she was just too worn out. lol

silveroonmyst October 8 2007, 17:19:29 UTC

Well you gt it right about begging for someone to end it. And doctors never listen lol.

anony_2 October 8 2007, 15:49:17 UTC

This was just fantastic. I really like your use of Flitwick's nightly needs and the book to announce the birth when it finally happened.

kanedax October 8 2007, 16:01:42 UTC

Thanks! It was an idea that popped into my head after I decided to, you know, NOT have the stereotypical "congratulations, it's a boy, oh I lurve you" ending.

At first it was going to be Neville, but he was too busy proning it up with Luna.

jra923 October 9 2007, 00:17:03 UTC

Well, another good one from you... Come to think of it, when did you ever gave us a 'not good one'? I just hope you have another chapter that would explore more Neville/Luna relationship... They are growing on me. Hehe!

kanedax October 9 2007, 13:21:59 UTC

Well, I personally think I've had some weak ones, but as long as the audience digs them who am I to complain? ;)

There is going to be more Neville/Luna down the line. Especially now that I've tossed Uriel into the mix. I didn't even expect to have any sort of triangle until I started writing this chapter. But they will be touched again. How, I have no idea.

jra923 October 11 2007, 07:23:00 UTC

Well, you may have ones, but, on the over-all, it is really a good story.

'How, I have no idea.'

Come on, your one of the few writers (esp. when it comes to updating) I know that has a very workaholic muse. Add to that, a very imaginative brain-full-of-ideas. Hehe!!

kanedax October 11 2007, 13:13:58 UTC

Workaholic's probably not the right term. I just know that:

1) I have ideas that I want to write down

2) I have a LOT of people wanting me to keep going

3) I really don't have much else of a life right now, so I might as well keep going.

If one of these three change, then, yeah, the stories will be clicking down considerably.

msninacat October 9 2007, 06:26:58 UTC

I am enjoying ready this so much! You are really a gifted writer. I hope you don't end this series too soon, it's one of my favorites!

kanedax October 9 2007, 13:01:48 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm not seeing this series ending any time soon. Of course, there are some people who think that there's no such thing. I wrote 45 chapters of a previous series, with a definitive ending, but people were screaming for more. It's that nature of fic.

But this is going to go till at LEAST 19 Years Later. So there's no end anytime soon.