Tenses and Pronouns, Part One

[kalleah]

This is third in a series featuring Ten II and Rose, following on from The Quiet Chamber and Flying Kites.

Thanks to platypus and nonelvis, who have patiently betaed this story and, as usual, helped me determine what needed to stay and what needed to go. A good editor is a writer's true ally.

Warning: Contains adult content in part two (which will be posted later

Comments

[np_complete]

I'm so happy to see this chapter today! I was wishing for good fic, happy fic, with love and emotion, today, and found it right on my flist!

[kalleah]

This is a happy story, isn't it? It didn't quite start out that way. I just have to believe that while Rose is going to have issues (and the Doctor will as well), that they will both adapt and remember that they love the other person deeply. Not in a clingy way, not really, but in the way that says you want to be with the other person and share your life.

[emerald_soleil]

Oh, this is beautiful! The emotional aspect of it feels very real and not at all contrived or forced. Kudos!

[kalleah]

Thank you! That's what I was going for. :)

[kalleah]

<----- points to icon :)

[ladychi]

Oh, hun. You've moved me to tears over happy feelings -- this was just what I needed after my horrible, rotten, no-good-weekend and Monday.

I just love the sexual tension here -- and I love even more that it's going to be resolved soon! I can't wait to see the second chapter. Fantastic job. Molto bene!

[kalleah]

Hey, I'm glad to have helped, and thank you!

[kalleah]

There's a middle story, too, if you haven't seen it.