Tenses and Pronouns, Part One

[kalleah]

This is third in a series featuring Ten II and Rose, following on from The Quiet Chamber and Flying Kites.

Thanks to platypus and nonelvis, who have patiently betaed this story and, as usual, helped me determine what needed to stay and what needed to go. A good editor is a writer's true ally.

Warning: Contains adult content in part two (which will be posted later

Comments

[karenor]

Oh very nice. This is just the sort of fic I needed to get lost in for a little while today. I felt myself rereading every few lines to make it last longer. It's all very vivid, the emotions very palpable and real. Not crazy emo or angst, but just right. I look forward to the rest.

[kalleah]

Thank you! More to come in a couple of days.

[liber_noctuae]

ooh a lovely beginning, can't wait to see the rest :)

[kalleah]

Thank you!

[nurse_stiney]

::happy sigh:: You've continued with this series! Of course, that meant I had to go back and read the first two plus this...and I really love your portrayal of the Doctor and Rose. The awkwardness mixed with the cuteness and now added hotness were a perfect balance, and I am SO looking forward to the resolved tension! :D

[kalleah]

I'm glad you've enjoyed all of them. Thanks!

[fishface44]

I just love how you write! This is wonderful!

[kalleah]

Thank you kindly. :)

[swankkat]

Been waiting for a continuation of this story ever since Flying Kites. This did not disappoint. Thanks for making me love TenII/Rose as much as I ever did - can't wait for the second part. :)

[kalleah]

Yay. There really did have to be kissing after Flying Kites, so I was left with no choice but to write it.