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kali1967

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Jul 11, 2010 19:45

So I'm posting a few GK drabbles/ficlets here for my own archiving purposes-I completely forgot I'd written one of these ^^;;

( Good Driving, gen, Nate, Ray, 250 words )

writing, generation kill fic

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meeks00 July 12 2010, 01:13:53 UTC

Just what I needed to read! I love how all-encompassing each of these ficlets are. That is, it seems like they're all well-defined and have a full close. Nice work ( ... )

kali1967 July 12 2010, 09:48:46 UTC

Thank you so much for all the awesome comments! And hmmmm for the Brad!fic idea, that sounds interesting. I might have to poke at that for a little bit :P

meeks00 July 12 2010, 16:49:30 UTC

Bahahaha! Yay! I just love the idea of that. He doesn't talk too much and seems like he's a very intimidating figure. I wonder if chicks would see him and WAAAANT him, approach with that strutting kind of feminine walk, and he'd just cut a grinat them. Then they'd say something like, "Hey, is this seat taken?" or "Want to buy me a drink?" And he'd shrug to both, but if one of them happens to be lucky, he'd just raise a finger for another beer (not asking what they'd like, because if they didn't want a beer, he'd lose interest because of the prissy drink ( ... )

kali1967 July 12 2010, 18:40:25 UTC

OMG I think I love you for this comment! It's just so perfect and I can see it all happening in my head-no seriously, in my head the bar's kinda lit red/orangey for some reason-and it's all awesome! Poor Brad and his lack of/disinterest in social skills :P

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l_s_d_me July 12 2010, 01:40:14 UTC

all of these were so completely lovely! I think my favourite was In Which Ray Person Doesn't Cuddle. Except When He Does because it was oh so sweet <33

kali1967 July 12 2010, 09:49:39 UTC

Thanks!

sharksdontsleep July 12 2010, 02:16:03 UTC

So, of course I &hearts the one you wrote for me. BRAD! RAY! THE BEACH! Brad's WET.

But then you wrote Ray and Walt, and they're SNUGGLING and CUDDLING and CUDDLESNUGGLING. Oh, Walt. Walt is my favorite, except for Ray. OK, they're all my favorite, but he is esp. deserving of cuddles.

Because they are clearly like this:

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kali1967 July 12 2010, 09:51:19 UTC

Lol, the surprise kitty!pic made me make a very strange noise :P And Thank you!

And I'm really glad you liked the one I wrote for you because I was like 'OMG new person what if she hates it?!' *is paranoid*

sharksdontsleep July 12 2010, 15:17:55 UTC

KITTEHS! I hope it was a strange good noise.

No paranoia necessary - we love the Brad/Ray, and the Ray/Walt, and the Ray/Lilley, and the Everybody/Everybody up in here.

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kali1967 July 12 2010, 18:42:14 UTC

It was a very good noise that got repeated when I wondered if they were the Marine rescue kitties? They look like they are. Dude, Ray/Lilley is fast becoming my obscure OTP-I wanna write more of them, mostly because I have such a girlcrush on Lilley, lol.

Also, there needs to be like, a list/challenge of all the people/objects Ray's humped because you just know that wasn't the first time he got personal with Walt's head :P

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