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Jul 11, 2010 19:45

So I'm posting a few GK drabbles/ficlets here for my own archiving purposes-I completely forgot I'd written one of these ^^;;

( Good Driving, gen, Nate, Ray, 250 words )

writing, generation kill fic

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meeks00 July 12 2010, 01:13:53 UTC

Just what I needed to read! I love how all-encompassing each of these ficlets are. That is, it seems like they're all well-defined and have a full close. Nice work ( ... )

kali1967 July 12 2010, 09:48:46 UTC

Thank you so much for all the awesome comments! And hmmmm for the Brad!fic idea, that sounds interesting. I might have to poke at that for a little bit :P

meeks00 July 12 2010, 16:49:30 UTC

Bahahaha! Yay! I just love the idea of that. He doesn't talk too much and seems like he's a very intimidating figure. I wonder if chicks would see him and WAAAANT him, approach with that strutting kind of feminine walk, and he'd just cut a grinat them. Then they'd say something like, "Hey, is this seat taken?" or "Want to buy me a drink?" And he'd shrug to both, but if one of them happens to be lucky, he'd just raise a finger for another beer (not asking what they'd like, because if they didn't want a beer, he'd lose interest because of the prissy drink ( ... )

kali1967 July 12 2010, 18:40:25 UTC

OMG I think I love you for this comment! It's just so perfect and I can see it all happening in my head-no seriously, in my head the bar's kinda lit red/orangey for some reason-and it's all awesome! Poor Brad and his lack of/disinterest in social skills :P

meeks00 July 13 2010, 15:17:04 UTC

♥ -- You should write it. Yes PLEASE. I want to see what YOU see.

Yes to indifferent!Brad. He's disinterested until Ray comes along, and then Brad apparently drops that and it's overwhelming. But not for Ray-Ray, who is like bottled up SUNSHINE-ENERGY(c), which is why his food can't stay in his mouth and spills all over the place. So Ray apparently is the only one who can handle it, eh?

kali1967 July 13 2010, 18:53:44 UTC

*sighs* I can never resist peer pressure. I've started it, but I make no promises and I might have to poke you for help once or twice :D

meeks00 July 13 2010, 22:46:39 UTC

LOL I like to think there is good peer pressure and bad peer pressure, but really, it's all relative. Of course I think pressuring other people to write more fics is a good thing. Of course I am entirely, and shamelessly, selfish. ;)

I am here at your beck and call, dear! On Twitter, via e-mail or whatever venue. Chatting about this stuff is FUN. Good luck!

kali1967 July 13 2010, 22:54:04 UTC

Dude, Brad's turned into an asshole! He's taking unapproachable to a whole new level. Like, these are his three big sentences:

Brad snorts, throws a glance at her that's more of a glare. “Don't fucking insult me. I'm a Marine.”

“We're defending the fucking country-you think we learn how to knit and sing songs?”

“Do you want to fuck or not?”

I didn't mean for him to be so mean! But at least Ray won't be put off by his asshole-ness? *worries*

meeks00 July 13 2010, 23:02:54 UTC

HAHAHAHA I love a-holes. Well, character a-holes. They're the BEST.

WHEEEE. YAY for the power of RAY. I think it'll work out well, bb!

kali1967 July 13 2010, 23:03:59 UTC

Eee, I'm really hoping it works out well-I don't want to break them both again ^^;;

Btw, just realised I never actually introduced myself to you, just sort of friended you randomly, so-hi, I'm Kali ^_^

meeks00 July 14 2010, 02:11:50 UTC

I can't WAIT to read your Brad/Ray! I was talking about it with l_s_d_me. We chat about important things like LJ and fics and such while at work. Helps with productivity, you see.

LOL! ::waves:: Hi, Kali! I'm Mika ;) Yay for friending!

kali1967 July 14 2010, 09:19:07 UTC

Lol, that's so cool, I have no fangirls at work (my (male) manager actually likes Twilight, ugh), so I just sit there writting porn in my notebook :P

*waves* Hii!

meeks00 July 14 2010, 13:51:11 UTC

Oh haha! We don't work together -- are sadly states apart ;)

Twilight? Shudders.

Yay for the porn notebook! LOL Props to you and the others who can write in those. I've never been able to do it. I can't read my handwriting when I do because I can't get the words down quickly enough, and then I forget what I was writing. Also, I can't retract or rephrase. How do you do it?

kali1967 July 14 2010, 20:29:40 UTC

Lol, my handwriting is atrocious-sometimes even I can't read it well, but I've had years of practise at deciphering it so I can usually guess what the squiggles are meant to be :P

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