Title: Retribution Three
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Major angst + Tragedy
Characters: Fei Long, Alexei, Yoh
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
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kajornwan TRANSLATIONS UPDATE: CI (first arc) is now being translated into Polish by
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he’s just too adorably crude and blunt it should be illegal!)You're very right, I especially love his bluntness. I wanted him to be despicable but honestly and bluntly despicable which makes a charming man and villain to me. Someone who gets out there and say, "hey I don't love you yet but I want to have sex with you anyway. What's so wrong with that?" He's very flattering in a sense and very adorable in his childish ways. I love ( ... )
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And who could possibly hate Alexei? His behavior maybe despicable at times but that makes him cute and lovable. There's something about younger spoiled brothers - especially if they know it - that begs to be adored,no?
Ooooh, i cant wait for the next chapter! No, you're a wonderful writer. You never fail to put your readers on edge!You betcha! I'd be with you tillthe end!
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especially if they know it
I think you said it perfectly. Especially if they know it! There's a difference between an ignorant spoiled brat, and one that is proudly spoiled XDBut a lot of ppl do hate Alexei, for real.
Thanks again for the encouragement. I shall try!^^!
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Thanks again for commenting and I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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As for what Mikhail has to say to that..
Mik: Oh? Interesting *smirks*.
*gets bricked*
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Too soon! To lose Alexei this soon! Argh!
I understand Fei will be hunting someone down soon? I see this as something that drives Fei. I see Alexei as someone really important to Fei, nothing like Mik's place in his heart but important nonetheless. Which is why he doesn't want to jeopardize whatever friendship/relationship he has with Alex by sleeping with him. It's a stronger Fei i see this time compared to the last chapter. Go Fei! Just something to set him off.
This is totally unexpected. It's good. A little sudden though. Well, that attack was. sudden.
With that said. I love the fact that Yoh is back. Yohhh!! <3
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wait.
you're not killing Yoh too right? DLol. I couldn't get the image of a naked Fei running around and scolding “Son of a bitch!”. I have no idea whyyy ( ... )
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I understand Fei will be hunting someone down soon?
Well, Alexei is important to Fei, but more than this Alexei is most important to Mikhail. Fei Long is, after all, someone who would do anything for someone he loves - when he realizes that he loves.
I love the fact that Yoh is back. Yohhh!! <3 Oh, you're a Yoh x Fei? *glares* Just kidding. I missed ( ... )
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So I had to re-read it ^_^
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Well, for Fei, 2 things if you wanna include the penthouse, even though it looks like swiss cheese now...
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Oh yes, Yoh, he just came back from fishing and he's here for a while (though I must say I can't guarantee anything. I had planned for Alexei to be alive to the end, one day muse just decided to kill him T_T)
P.S. LMAO You just had to ask!! Wouldn't that be a treat to Yoh if Fei was naked? XD
Yoh: Oh *_* NAked Fei! Bingo! *gets shot*
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