[fic] Cruel Intentions: Retribution Three

[kajornwan]

Title: Retribution Three
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Major angst + Tragedy
Characters: Fei Long, Alexei, Yoh
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399
Previous Chapters: On the side bar of my lj kajornwan

TRANSLATIONS UPDATE: CI (first arc) is now being translated into Polish by yoan_chan *hugs*. The first chapter is finished

Comments

Re: Darling, you are pure evil

[kajornwan]

I'm so sorry T_T but this is exactly the response that I wanted from writing this arc. To tell you the truth, I have many times thought about giving Alexei x Fei a go for a brief period, like in a real relationship, where Fei would be using him as a substitute, and Alexei would end up hurting himself much more than he had bargained for, meanwhile Mikhail would fall even further into his drug abuse. oh the delicious love triangle! But this is about Fei Long's journey to find closure. So I must stay on course ^^! But even as I type this, man I ITCH!!!! If I didn't have to work I'll write 3 versions of this!

he’s just too adorably crude and blunt it should be illegal!)
You're very right, I especially love his bluntness. I wanted him to be despicable but honestly and bluntly despicable which makes a charming man and villain to me. Someone who gets out there and say, "hey I don't love you yet but I want to have sex with you anyway. What's so wrong with that?" He's very flattering in a sense and very adorable in his childish ways. I love him very much too, and I'm so glad to hear that at least a reader feels the same *hugs*

So many questions indeed, and this was the point of Alexei's untimely death - it gives me unlimited openings to play with so many character's feelings. Everyone's actually, from Fei, Mik, Yoh, Asami, Aki, Vladimir, Feodora to villains like Yan and Toh. I even want to bring Yuri back. But also because of these possibilities, I'm going to need some time to play them right - if only to make it worth Alexei's death *hugs Alexei*

P.S. Wow, that is indeed one flattering comment. I've always considered myself to be rather handicapped in expressing the angst I see in these scenes which have always been most difficult for me to write. I'm glad to hear that my efforts get somewhere. And flow of creative juice is definitely not stopping, the problem is, it's pouring in all directions like a fountain that i'm not sure which path I should take because they're all equally tempting!!!

Thanks again for staying with me for so long, sweetie. *hugs & kisses too*

Re: Darling, you are pure evil

[nikkita_maldita]

oh well at least i was able to give a reaction you want. But i seriously wish that you had given Fei and Alexei to be together even for just a moment.Hm, a back story perhaps? A love trriangle will surely be delectable.:D Darling, the two version could always come later, you can write them too. (i would then be one happy girl)

And who could possibly hate Alexei? His behavior maybe despicable at times but that makes him cute and lovable. There's something about younger spoiled brothers - especially if they know it - that begs to be adored,no?

Ooooh, i cant wait for the next chapter! No, you're a wonderful writer. You never fail to put your readers on edge!You betcha! I'd be with you tillthe end!

Re: Darling, you are pure evil

[kajornwan]

Back story is very probable, considering that I still want to write him badly. Or I might just write another version altogether.

especially if they know it
I think you said it perfectly. Especially if they know it! There's a difference between an ignorant spoiled brat, and one that is proudly spoiled XDBut a lot of ppl do hate Alexei, for real.

Thanks again for the encouragement. I shall try!^^!