(for toro-nagashi) pills n potions ✸ part 2 of 2

[parkourdeer]

❊ for: toro-nagashi
❊ title: pills n potions

Comments

[rjaejoo]

I usually try to avoid fics that deal with depression and rape, but this one is well written and not too dark for me.  You did a pretty good job moving the story along and developing their relationship without compromising the story or characters.  Good job.

[toro_nagashi]

This was beautiful! I really can't see how you don't have much experience with angst because the emotions in this were really strong and I loved how both Jongin and Kyungsoo had their own problems and they managed to work through them together and oh god this made me so emotional. I think you interpreted and wrote my prompt incredibly and I am so so so grateful for this gorgeous fic; thank you so much for writing it!! ☺️

[whiskerd]

This was an interesting read! I liked the way your writing unraveled Jongin as well as Kyungsoo's thoughts for their symptoms. I liked how you didn't drag the story while handling these mental illnesses. (: I would have loved to see their relationship fleshed out a bit more hehe.

Good job author-nim!!

[ext_3286672]

I like how you kept it short and sweet yet effective. ;-; Half way through i was wondering Jongin was gonna die but viola!! Happy ending! (๑´`๑)♡ I like reading soft angst, this wasnt hardcore yet there were parts I would have been sobbing but yehehehe.I loved this! Good job, author.

[regal_shadow]

It's so beautifully written...especially the way you described their emotions, its so breathtakingly beautiful. Good job!^^