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kaisooaufest

[I22] MISFIRE (2/2)

Aug 01, 2016 19:57

Prompt Code: I22
Title: Misfire

( Misfire: Part 2 )

category: i, round 1: 2016

Comments 11

anonymous August 1 2016, 13:41:12 UTC

This went from funny to sweet to angst and then sweet again it was a lovely read and jongin's description of kyungsoo made me laugh " He is cute and quiet but he also likes to hit people" so accurate
Thank you author

shadowhunterrx August 1 2016, 20:30:55 UTC

Man that was a rollercoaster of emotions,
very nicely written!
Thanks for writing this :)

marymill207 August 2 2016, 11:47:49 UTC

Oh god, I cried... this story was so beautiful and your writing was amazing. You weaved in things so perfectly, like there was more said than what was written. When i finished reading it almost felt like I had read a novel.

Thank you so much! ♡♡♡

anonymous August 2 2016, 15:01:14 UTC

The angst especially when Kyungsoo went blind was really perfect. I loved the combinations of this fic. I loved the friendship of ChanBaekSoo <3 But above all, I really loved the part where Jongin showed how much he loves Kyungsoo ㅠ

“I understand and I forgive you, but I want you to know that you were wrong. You did not and will not spare me any pain by staying away from me. I want to be who you depend on. I want to love you, hyung.”

This line is just achingly sweet. ㅠㅠ I love every bit of this fic. Thank you for this!! :)

jonginspuppy August 2 2016, 23:48:53 UTC

the angst!!!!!!!!
at least kyungsoo is not alone anymore now :(