[H04] MIRAGE

[kaisooaufest]

Prompt Code: H04
Title: Mirage
Rating: G
Side Pairings (if any): -
Warnings: Depression implied.
Word Count: 6913
Summary: n. 1. Something illusory or insubstantial.
Kyungsoo is drowning in a blank ocean of thoughts and Jongin is sailing over it.
AU: Based on Drip Drop by Taemin
AN: I just want to take a moment to thank my beta for

Comments

[shadowhunterrx]

I liked this very much,
Especially this part.
(Although I liked everything)

“Would you like to come along and explore the universe with me?” Jongin says, looking Kyungsoo in the eyes.

“With the saddest excuse for a human being? Anytime.”

But you wrote the story very well,
Thanks for writing this!

[mimeticflower]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this!
I'm glad you enjoyed it love

[anonymous]

Ah~ this is very simple yet so beautiful! You have your own way with words and that makes this seriously beautiful
I really teared up, I was carried away with your words. Thank you so much author for this work of art ♥ Thanks to the prompter as well! :)

[mimeticflower]

Oh no don't tear up!! Thank you for reading, it's always a pleasure to find comments like your's.

[anonymous]

"with you is the dream I was always longing for."

This is so beautiful ;___;

Two lost souls, living their life routinely day in day out, finding each other.
It's so beautiful.
I can relate to Kyungsoo so much. I could tell his monotonous life made him so flat and boring. He was living a life void of purpose. I often feel this way. I go to school so I can get a job, when I get a job, I will live my life working everyday until I die.
I love the change in his routine led to meeting Jongin, someone unexpected brought color back to his life. When Kyungsoo considered Jongin part of his routine, my heart skipped a beat. It was such a big step for him because he doesn't let anyone in. (I love the detail with Baekhyun, an acquaintance but not a friend.)

My top 2 scenes is when he saw Jongin for the first time. Your description of Jongin dancing in the rain at night was so beautiful. The 2nd is the reunion scene. I love their conversation. Kyungsoo was accepting. He knew Jongin came back for him.

“Just get to the end already

[mimeticflower]

This means so so much to me! I'm really glad you noticed the detail with Baekhyun. (I honestly thought no one would)
But thanks to you my dear love for the beautiful comment

[anonymous]

Wow, this was a really nice one! thank you

[mimeticflower]

Thank you for reading!

[anonymous]

this was lovely, thank you

[mimeticflower]

If only I could know your username!! I bet you are even more lovely, thank you so so much