Oohh maann, that was so lovely! I Loved the way tou wrote Kaisoos relationship. Jongin going after Kyungsoo was so beautiful, And the Island sounds like heaven tbh. thanks for writing this!
i lovvveeeddd thissssss oh my godddd it's literally 3am for me and i said i'd read this in the morning and idk what it was but the intro just dragged me further into the fic and before i knew it i was done??
first of all, you write so wonderfully, dear author ;; ; your dialogue is so witty and clever, i particularly loved: “This one resembles a harp,” he points out as he places it in the pile in Jongin’s hands. “Wouldn’t that be peculiar? Little fishes playing music.”idk. it's a small line but it was just a really feel-good line and made me smile. of course, it's just one of the lines that i liked :o
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YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE ISLAND WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL AND I COULD UNDERSTAND WHY JONGIN TERRIBLY LOVES IT AND ITS INHABITANTS. AAND THE SNIPPETS OF HIS CHILDHOOD IS GOOOLD LIKE IT'S SO NOSTALGIC AND IT GIVES OFF WARMVIBES <33
BUUUUT THE TWIST HAH I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING FISHY (OTHER THAN THE FISHES) WHEN KYUNGSO KEPT ON MENTIONING THIGNS FROM HIS PAST OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT
ASDFHASKJFHSKJ OVERALL THIS IS JUST GREATTT OKAY KAISOO FOREVERRR! BLESS THE PROMPTER AND WRITER FOR BRINGING THIS TO LIFEE /CRIES
idk if you've ever seen/heard of the movie "bedevilled" but it takes place on an island outside a city with some ppl who really want to go to the mainland and some who really, really don't, and let me just say that i was beyond relieved when i remembered that this is no one dies this time, which means no one dies ovo
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Loved it the description of the island was wonderful and I expected the drama to come when Jongin told kyungsoo he knew the truth, I totally didn't expect what happened
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I Loved the way tou wrote Kaisoos relationship.
Jongin going after Kyungsoo was so beautiful,
And the Island sounds like heaven tbh.
thanks for writing this!
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first of all, you write so wonderfully, dear author ;; ; your dialogue is so witty and clever, i particularly loved: “This one resembles a harp,” he points out as he places it in the pile in Jongin’s hands. “Wouldn’t that be peculiar? Little fishes playing music.”idk. it's a small line but it was just a really feel-good line and made me smile. of course, it's just one of the lines that i liked :o ( ... )
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YOUR DESCRIPTION OF THE ISLAND WAS REALLY BEAUTIFUL AND I COULD UNDERSTAND WHY JONGIN TERRIBLY LOVES IT AND ITS INHABITANTS.
AAND THE SNIPPETS OF HIS CHILDHOOD IS GOOOLD LIKE IT'S SO NOSTALGIC AND IT GIVES OFF WARMVIBES <33
BUUUUT THE TWIST HAH I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING FISHY (OTHER THAN THE FISHES) WHEN KYUNGSO KEPT ON MENTIONING THIGNS FROM HIS PAST OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT
ASDFHASKJFHSKJ OVERALL THIS IS JUST GREATTT OKAY KAISOO FOREVERRR! BLESS THE PROMPTER AND WRITER FOR BRINGING THIS TO LIFEE /CRIES
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