[B18] PUT YOUR VENOM IN ME (3/3)

Jul 11, 2016 14:56





Prompt Code: B18
Title: put your venom in me

put your venom in me: Part 3 )

round 1: 2016, category: b

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anonymous July 11 2016, 09:04:13 UTC
Back then, Jongin took all of those touches for granted. But if they make it out alive, he’ll savor every one of them.*sobs ( ... )

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pocketks July 11 2016, 13:32:25 UTC
i can't stop thinking about this line:
“Mhm,” Kyungsoo smirks at him, “I’ve been known to make people beg.”

good god don't do this to me.

author this is so great ;; all the twists are wonderful omg i gasped out loud when ksoo was arrested for ownership of the club and damn, was shocked to see he would be getting the death sentence :(( and VERSATILE!KAISOO, bless you bless your soul

thigh fucking in the shower can it get any better also sehun's 11 minutes line lmao

the smut scenes were so sensual and beautifully written ;; tHey LoVE EACH OTHER so much i'm trash thank you for writing and sharing with us !! <33

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pocketks July 17 2016, 00:38:20 UTC
IM CRYING I JUST REALISED THE 11 MINUTES PAQHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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shadowhunterrx July 11 2016, 14:12:13 UTC
I suck at writing comments, im sorry.
but I wanted to let you know that I loved this fic and thanks you so much fr writing this!

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bookishvice July 11 2016, 14:41:32 UTC
HELLO! YES! MY PROMPT!
I am freaking out so much over this fict. It's so well written and gripped my attention all the way through. The opening scene reminds me so much of Jongin’s drama Choco Bank! Hahaha I also love how you worked that dystopian theme! The technology, the walled in city with the outside being in ruins and forbidden. Ugh, I’m such a sucker for stories like these! And lets not forget all the action and drama and sexy times that happened T^T I'm really just all over the place with this.

Modesty doesn’t exist in a world without lust.
THIS IS AMAAAAZING. There are things that would inevitably be different in a world ‘without’ lust. You did a great job of implementing these chages!

The LPS!!! HAH! VITAMINS TO SUBDUE THE PEOPLE. I KNEW IT

He mumbles about it tasting like poison before walking over to the fridge to get out a juice box. He’s mature and sophisticated./CACKLES ( ... )

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anonymous July 11 2016, 14:47:58 UTC
I liked hoe dependable both of them were, how secure they were in their relationship. I hope they dismantle the gov all while looking badass and sexy. Futuristic bonnie and clyde, but less violent.

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