[B18] PUT YOUR VENOM IN ME (3/3)

Jul 11, 2016 14:56





Prompt Code: B18
Title: put your venom in me

put your venom in me: Part 3 )

round 1: 2016, category: b

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anonymous July 11 2016, 14:49:19 UTC
This story is so creative and wonderful:) I like how you constructed an alternate universe with some elements that mirrors our society, its quite deep

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nudaetelhu July 11 2016, 14:57:56 UTC
JUST ONE, KRISSOO IS LIFE OKAY. NO ONE TOUCH ME.

And oh my god, the idea is so nice and and and FUCKING JUNMYEON I SWEAR TO GOD I WAS CHANTING FOR JONGIN TO SHOOT HIM BECAUSE FUCK HE IS ANNOYING.

Also when they first had sex was just AW from start to finish. JONGIN NOT KNOWING WHAT AN ERECTION IS MY PURE BABY . This really nice. Surprisingly heartwarming haha thank you for this!!!<3

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anonymous July 11 2016, 16:16:21 UTC
THIS WAS AMAZING
I love how Jongin manned up for Kyungsoo in the end because he treasures Kyungsoo a lot ♡ how precious ;A;
I love this fic bcs Top!Soo is what I believe in and this is the very epitome of Top!Soo not only bcs of the smut (dont get me wrong the smut was amazing with badass soo and virgin jongin dat was lyf) but bcs its ksoo who leads the relationship too?thats how I understood it tho
Im sorry for this blabber :( Thank you for this this tho this is a masterpice and will definetely be one of my go to kaisoo fics ♡

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ext_3195512 July 11 2016, 16:35:18 UTC
Wow, Junmyeon was a dick here. But I liked how you set-up the entire thing with him visiting the bank at the very beginning. I was able to put together the pieces and figure out the ~twist before it was revealed.

Anyway, I'm honestly not as a hardcore of a Kaisoo shipper anymore because of last April Fool's, but this was the first time I encountered a dystopian/"utopian" au (which is my favorite genre for novels!), so I just had to read it!

Needless to say, I was not disappointed.

You set up the setting really well! "Modesty doesn’t exist in a world without lust." This really captured the environment they were in, and perfectly described what kind of views and morals they had, and all in one sentence ( ... )

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anonymous July 11 2016, 17:42:51 UTC
WELL FUCK

how am i supposed to live my life now that i finished this amazing piece of art. HOW?!

i'm sorry if i can't be coherent rn but it was just so great and ughhh it's a little bit of everything i wanted but th suspense before and after kssoo got caught ughh i felt like dyingg and thought of dropping it bc i hate angst and tragedy but then i remember that htis was a happy ending fest so all goood lol

thank you for sharing this /sobs ughh LOVE LIVE KAISOO FICS WITH HAPPY ENDINGS!

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