A Sweet Escape

Aug 11, 2010 22:43


Title: A Sweet Escape
Author: Kaipop 
Pairing: HaeHyuk.
Ratings: PG. I think. 
Genre: Romance,Angst(Slight),Fluff,Drama
Disclaimer: As much as I want to, I don't own anyone in this fic...Yet. I only own the fic itself.
Summary: 
Thinking about his father Dong Hae goes into deep depression feeling alone and unloved. Then Eun Hyuk comes and flips his ( Read more... )

eunhae, haehyuk, kail: fanfiction, fandom: super junior, birthday, !fic! a sweet escape, welcome

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kaipop August 12 2010, 02:53:33 UTC
tremmy_chii's spot! :D

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tremmy_chii August 12 2010, 03:02:41 UTC
I LOVE YOU 8D *Dances around the spot* Will be back to spam LOL >D

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tremmy_chii August 12 2010, 04:21:12 UTC
Well first things first Thank you for the dedication! ♥ I really didn't expect that because I usually don't get any mention for my opinion LOL. You're welcome too! ^______^ I will listen to your complaints about your own fic anyway LOL. BEcause one day, I might explode from my happy-happy and make you listen to mine. ;D ...Although that hasn't really happened yet. ._____. EXPECT THE UNEXPECTED!~ XDD *Touched*

Donghae and his father always breaks my heart. ;A; They were really close I heard? It must be really tough to see someone you hold dear die. I DON'T EVER WANT TO SEE MY DADDY DIE. *WAILS* TT_______TT HE'S - HE'S ALREADY 60 AND I'M ONLY SO YOUNG. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Anyway. XD LOL

He felt this while watching spoiled children split a popsicle with their father on a hot,humid day, seeing arguments between father and son, and watching something simple like a toddler tugging on his/her father’s hand through a park,because they always reminded him of what he used to have, and when all of the memories of his dad came back all he wanted ( ... )

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kaipop August 12 2010, 15:38:17 UTC
was it good? I wasn't very sure >.< I'm glad you liked it! -stares at giant comment-
No problem for the dedication (; I had thought from the very beginning to dedicate it to you as well...Ahaha I wouldn't mind listening to you worrying about your fic (;

I know it's depressing right :0 I just started to write this without any idea of the outcome...At first it was going to be a KyuMin fic to be honest and then I didn't like the plot that I had thought of for it and just sat here typing away my fate with a EunHae fic! Yay!....

Lmao I'm glad you liked that part ^^ it was fun to write...As evil as that sounds >.<

KEKEKE YEAH I DID! Did you like it....It was a fail food fight but...Oh well XD Yeah I was like hmmmmmm Dong Hae wouldn't like the taste of raw egg would he -_-'

LMAO! <3 YEAH I DID SEE THE STAR CALL -is jealous XD-

XD FLUFF!-Tries to figure out inside joke- LMAO I DON'T GET IT >.< Lol! I was like...Hmmm what is better then a normal cloth that Ryeo Wook would have to buy....SHAM WOW SHOULD DO THE TRICK -writes it in- YESH I ( ... )

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sakurashinehae August 16 2010, 02:10:02 UTC
Ahhh sorry that I'm only reading this now...my laptop FROZE right when I got to this page T_T

Stories about Donghae and his father always make my cry. I know they were really close (watch videos of Donghae speaking about him, and I can guarantee he will ALWAYS cry). It's heart-breaking...yet I still read them anyway x)

He hurt, more then ever today,because he remembered him, his father, memories came and lashed him straight across the face leaving deep imprints on his mind and heart.

This two sentences...I can't explain it but it really broke my heart.

Tears slowly flew down his face like a spitting rain. The tears brought to his eyes weren’t from the beautifulness of the moon this time, they weren’t from anything pointless like that.

Ahhh, I just love this story! I sure wish I was part of the foodfight. I would sure love to see Donghae with a cracked egg on his head ;)
Goodjob! I hope I can read another fanfic soon !

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kaipop August 16 2010, 04:35:36 UTC
Oh :0 it's no problem at all ^^ I'm happy that you read it! :D

Yeah me to ); I can't even imagine to think how hard it was on him! If I lost my dad...I would feel lost. Atleast my story had a happy ending XD

The inspiration for those scentences came from an episode of "Strong Heart" when they were talking about how emotional Dong Hae could be. He talked about how he cried one day because of how beautiful the moon was XP so cute!

Thank you :D I am EXTREMELY glad you liked it! Normally I wouldn't want to be caught in a food fight. But a food fight with Eun Hyuk and Dong Hae, count me in!
Thank you again and I will try to run over another plot bunny!

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suju_wonderbang August 16 2010, 05:14:59 UTC
Hallo thar~
EEE THANKS FOR POSTING THIS~~
It's late where I am but I was feeling gloomy about HaeHyuk but then you posted this awesome, sweet, fluffy, and cup-cake filled one-shot!!!! ^_________^
It was really good for your first one-shot. :D (The first fic-like thing I posted was a piece of shiznit...;___;)
ANYWAYS, those two...<33 Hae and Hyukkie are super sweet together. ^^
But I always feel sad when Hae's dad is mention. TT____TT Poor Fishy...I'd hate to lose my daddy! D:
But DongHae you totally ruined the moment. XD
And the Sham Wow made me lost it. X3 Hehehe...made me think of ShamWoohoo! :DDD LOL Ryan Higa..
Anyways, thanks again for posting!!! Really uplifted my mood. :3
Byes~
I hope you post some more!!! ^____^

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kaipop August 16 2010, 05:32:16 UTC
Hi~
Your welcome! Thanks for commenting ^^
It's late where I am to... :0
:D I am very glad you liked it! It makes me feel warm and fuzzy on the inside <3
Thank you! (I originally used to post anime fanfiction on quizilla when I was like...9? It was horrible!)
Yeah I really like the two of them together <3 they just fit...
Yeah me too D: (mentioned it anyways XD) Me too!
I felt the need to make him ruin the moment XD it seemed like the EunHae/HyukHae thing to do!
Kekeke I love the Sham Wow and ShamWooHoo for that matter (; They are freaking amazing!
Your welcome!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for uplifting mine :3
Bye~
I hope so to^^

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cakeissexy August 16 2010, 18:13:33 UTC
Ello everyone who read this story. YOU SHOULD TOTALLY REREAD IT. Because I edited it :D

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eunhaelover August 16 2010, 18:51:35 UTC
this is really good for a first-timer!
hahaha i am a proud reader ♥

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kaipop August 17 2010, 02:08:36 UTC
Thank you :D
Kekeke I'm glad!

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