[one-shot] Displacement Theory

[kailice]

Title: Displacement Theory
Pairings: Sho/Ohno (Yama pair)
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Me no own, so you no sue.
Word Count: 6,042
Summary: Calculating the distance between “you” and “me” - the answer’s a perpetual state of in-betweens.
Notes: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO OUR FAVORITE RAPPER FAIL!MAN NEWSCASTER DORK

Comments

[anoudegozaruna]

I could write paragraphs about how wonderful this fic is, but I think most of it would be intelligible and made up of the word "awesome" thrown in every few words. I cried. Suffice to say that this was well worth the break I took from studying and totally made my day.

[kailice]

Thank you so much, bb <33 and in return, the only reply I'd be able to give would be to tell you how awesome you are every other word. ♥

[eufry]

Oh, I was moved to tears all right. This was such a thoughtful piece. And I think I understand what you could mean by "self-discovery

[kailice]

My favorite stories to read and write are ones that are "real". Where no matter the setting or genre, they make you stop to think and feel because what the characters are going through are real human thoughts and emotions. I don't know if that makes much sense, but most of the fics I write are inspired/based on a train of thought first, plot line second. That's why they're so introspective - I like getting into the characters' heads.

If Sho's love is typical, I haven't experienced it yet either XD but I agree, it is different, even though I'm not entirely sure how it is myself.

Oh yes it did. It took a lot of time to get both his and Sho's characters right in this one. One of these days I want to write a fic solely on what kind of presence Ohno has within Arashi, once I figure out how to make it a story instead of me rambling about it. XD

You've said so much already <3 and as for where I go from this... I guess we'll find out :)

Thank you ♥

I love I love I love I love.....

[sunnydreams416]

OMG SARAH ILU!!! I love this fic~ it's going to be memoried...

This is just so... ugh, I can't even express it and it frustrates me. I'm not even going try to find my favorite part because, well, I'd probably end up quoting the whole entire thing back to you (and it wouldn't fit into the comment box anyway). I want to flail at you properly but I can't, this fic has left me with no words... fail!flail (lol)

Will you settle for some ♥s instead? ♥♥♥♥♥ XD

I think with this fic you've really established your style as an author. There's something in the way it's written that comes across as being something you wrote. At least that's how I see it ^^;;

I ♥ very much.

Re: I love I love I love I love.....

[kailice]

ILU2BB! <333 Thank you, Thae! <3

Do not fear, your fail!flail still conveys so much <3 as to the ♥s! *gathers them all up* yup, I feel the love ♥♥♥

I've been thinking about that. I don't know what my style *is* exactly, but I feel now much more than before that the fics I write are "mine". I think that's what I lacked before. While now, I feel really proud of them because it means no one could have written them but me because they're in my voice. So, I'm happy you see it that way :)

I ♥ you very much.

[calerine]

OHYOU OH YOU!<3<3<3

I'LL BE BACK I'LL BE BACK! ASKLJDHAWJDHASJ The anticipation'll keep me through the week! Thank you, bb!

[kailice]

I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK! 8D Have a lovely week in the meantime! <3

[kailice]

Knowing that my fic makes you happy makes me happy <333

And thank you! :D