[one-shot][Ohmiya] Restoration

[kailice]

Title: Restoration
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I don’t even own my wallet, because apparently Johnny owns that, too.
Notes: This story… pretty much wrote itself. You could say I went Ohno-style and just wrote with the flow. Everything came out unexpectedly and differently than I’d planned, but I’m happy with the way it

Comments

[rikke_leonhart]

vhdfvhxgvh FIRST FIC?

You're made of awesome♥♥♥♥
I'm very impressed with how you interpret Arashi as a whole and then singles out Ohno's insecurity from the flood of emotions he's feeling. Nino's comfort is tangible <3
I simply love the way that you describe the awkwardness between them, how it was at first and how they needed to practice. It's so common in fics nowadays that everything is perfect and peachy right off the bat, and that's clearly not the case.

I want to quote my favourite parts, but I'll end up quoting the entire piece, so I'll settle for;

Somewhere between holding hands casually backstage and performing over-the-top skits as a duo in the name of fan service, Nino realized that he loved Ohno differently than he loved the rest. It was frightening because while attempting to suppress the excess emotion, Nino found out that once you had a taste, you could never go back.

That is...simply stunning and stole my breath away.

Thank you so much for sharing this, it will be memorie'd ♥

[kailice]

I spent the whole month working on it D:
And no, YOU are made of awesome ♥

You make me happy <3 That was what I was hoping to show, how despite the insecurities, they had comfort simply by being a part of Arashi... that sort of thing. And how even though they're comforting each other and they're comfortable around each other, they're still that degree of awkwardness.

I'm so-so-so really glad you liked it <3

And memorie'd? That's probably the biggest compliment you could ever give me ♥♥♥

[zazasukie]

I loved the way you use the storm to narrate the story, and the descriptions you do are really vivid and colorful. A really good fic!! ^___^b

[kailice]

lol I was inspired by the weather my part of the world has been having lately. Even right now it's stormy outside XD

Thank you for commenting! <333

[aidill]

I like the way you express it and your writing style!
And I loved your Ohmiya, of course!

[kailice]

Thank you! ♥
It's hard not to love Ohmiya, huh? XD

[a_mbry0]

ooh i loved this!♥ the story was so good, beautiful and lovely and the descriptions and the way you express everything.. totally love it!
and of course i love Ohmiya too! :D
you are really good at writing, thank you for sharing! ^_^

[kailice]

Thank you! I'm really glad that you liked it <333

[thetagal13]

Wow. Im amazed. And very shocked when you say this is your first fanfic. Its so beautifully written. The words choice and all were pretty and i could feel the intense feeling. Thank you for sharing =)

[kailice]

Thank you for reading! <333