[one-shot][Ohmiya] Restoration

[kailice]

Title: Restoration
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing. I don’t even own my wallet, because apparently Johnny owns that, too.
Notes: This story… pretty much wrote itself. You could say I went Ohno-style and just wrote with the flow. Everything came out unexpectedly and differently than I’d planned, but I’m happy with the way it

Comments

[scribblyness_x]

I want to be an Ohno carnivore too, so I shall stroke your ego to get some Ohno-shaped cookies.

The whole fic is lovely. I lovee the tidbits of Scientist!Aiba, DoS!Jun and Mommy!Sho inserts. I love love your portrayal of the Ohmiya relationship. I love love love all your metaphors pertaining the dynamics of Arashi.

♥ ♥
Ohno-cookies for me?

[kailice]

MOUNTAINS OF OHNO-COOKIES FOR YOU ♥

The funniest part? The carnivore thing was an accident D: I made a typo and Microsoft Word auto-corrected it as that XD I'm glad you liked the Arashi bits. I wasn't planning on them, but they became my favorite parts <3

Thanks for commenting!!

[i_am_zan]

You did wonderfully well with the words too and more besides! *kudos and applause* In addition to all that you used the word 'syntax' and 'dialect'. I am a sucker for language and Ohno-dialect is so much love!

This is a gorgeous piece of writing. ^__^

Also much love for Arashi dynamics!

edit because I cannot spell! Hah!

[kailice]

I wrote a paper on Adam Bede by George Eliot, and one of the quotes I used had the word "syntax" in it, and I thought it was a pretty word. And somehow "dialog" and "syntax" made the story about Ohno-dialect XD

Thank you for commenting!! ♥

spelling is my weakness OTL lol

[i_am_zan]

ohhh GE makes me cry ... *thinks of 'Mill on the Floss'* - oh and yaaay for booky people. ^__^

[kailice]

Oh, Mill on the Floss is so sad ;;_;; but Adam Bede has a much happier ending.

yaaay booky friends!! <3

[nicefinalbeam]

Pretty!

[kailice]

Double hearts, yay!

I'm glad you like the poison metaphor. I tried out a lot of metaphors with this, and I wasn't sure if they'd all work.

Thank you! <333

[trivialaffair]

There's something really amazing about this fic (and I can't believe this is your first fic because damn, you are good) that I can't quite pin down, but is amazing nonetheless. Your descriptions throughout are just amazing and I love your characterizations and vivid details. Just. Very lovely~

[kailice]

Thank you! Your comment makes me unbelievably happy ♥

[trivialaffair]

I live to please XD

[kailice]

You do your job well <3

[kailice]

Aw, thank you <333