#237: Sex Angel Magic

Jan 11, 2017 13:09

Title: Sex Angel Magic
Pairing(s): TaoKai
Rating: r
Length: 9840 words
Warning(s): [Please click to open.]some dirty language
Summary: Tao's friends hire him a stripper as a surprise for his birthday, said stripper trips on his pants during his routine and now it's 2 a.m. and he's holding his hand in the emergency room.

Author's Note: The hand holding is more, er, ( Read more... )

pairing: jongin/tao, round one, rating: r

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yuku_chun February 26 2017, 18:00:47 UTC
I don't even know what to say.
I didn't expect I would enjoy TaoKai - but I pretty darn did.
It's also the first time that I read a recent work from you so... yeah.
I absolutely love the way all the mentioned characters interacted and the conversations had me cackling so much!
I also had to think about the thing you discussed on twitter, about your smut being porn and not 'poetic', and you're right but it's so sexy and great this way. It's simple without much glitter (or well, yea with much glitter in this case) but it's SO effective!
I also really liked the interaction between Jongin and Tao and how they both were so sassy and yet intimate on an emotional level.
So, yeah... it was really hot and fun but also really cute. I didn't think it was possible but when I wasn't screaming or cackling, I cooed about how adorable Jongin could still be.
I don't really have anything else to say except that I kind of regret not reading it earlier?
Sorry for rambling. Lots of love <3

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eoryndal March 1 2017, 23:01:30 UTC
Yukuuuuu <3 I love your ramblings.

Do you see how beautiful and sexy TaoKai are? *_______* Ship all the ships with me!!

I'm glad to hear my smut writing skills haven't rusted yet. (So much for swearing I'd never write smut again after the kink exchange for which I wrote ~10k of really filthy bottom!Jongin pwp xD )

Jongin is a cute little baby bear even when he's a hot stripper. It's a law of nature.

Thank you for your comment, dear ^^

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yoshpet February 27 2017, 00:14:09 UTC
wow I didn't expect that to happen actually haha I started this fanfic in the believe it's about strippers and hot performances but prbly without sex scenes bc it's just rating r and such but DAMN the shower scene fucked me up for another hundred centuries orz what I liked the most was the way Tao cared for Jongin, not only by helping him to and out of the hospital but especially during the shower scene! I kinda feared that it was going to be rough and bareback shower sex and I was just like "no pls poor Nini can't move he's hurt don't" but you made Tao still be gentle, always watching out what he was doing while teasing and (let's say) caring for Jongin. pretty odd, but I liked that he didn't actually penetrate him, even tho he really really wanted to (so did I). also I agree to all the other precious comments about the perfectly hilarious nicknames and the way they tease each other! but I want to add that I liked the character of Dr. Do the most bc reasons and newly discovered kinks thx. I'm really looking forward to read more of ( ... )

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eoryndal March 1 2017, 23:31:46 UTC
Argh, I'm never too sure about the line between r and nc-17. There's certainly "sexually-oriented nudity" (isn't that nicely worded by the MPAA? xD ) but I felt like it wasn't strong enough for nc-17 /shrugs Do you know a rule of thumb for ratings?

Nooo, just thinking about Jongin having rough sex in his injured state makes me cringe from the imagined pain >.< Tao wouldn't take care of Jongin so mindfully only to throw it all out of the window for a quick fuck.

Writing them tease each other was so much fun, I'm glad you had fun too reading it.

/whispers If I may tell you a secret, they're going to have lots and lots of penetrative sex as soon as Jongin's leg is fully healed and he can give Tao that private lapdance or two or ten because he loves riding Tao, hehehe

And another secret is that Dr. Do and Mr. Byun the nurse are totally fucking, lmao

Also, if that kink you discovered happens to be medical kink, hit me up on Twitter and I'll link you the medical kink SuKai I wrote, if you don't mind the pairing. If that's not it, ( ... )

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