#237: Sex Angel Magic

[kaifectionery]

Title: Sex Angel Magic
Pairing(s): TaoKai
Rating: r
Length: 9840 words
Warning(s): [Please click to open.]some dirty language
Summary: Tao's friends hire him a stripper as a surprise for his birthday, said stripper trips on his pants during his routine and now it's 2 a.m. and he's holding his hand in the emergency room.

Author's Note: The hand holding is more, er,

Comments

[yoshpet]

wow I didn't expect that to happen actually haha I started this fanfic in the believe it's about strippers and hot performances but prbly without sex scenes bc it's just rating r and such but DAMN the shower scene fucked me up for another hundred centuries orz what I liked the most was the way Tao cared for Jongin, not only by helping him to and out of the hospital but especially during the shower scene! I kinda feared that it was going to be rough and bareback shower sex and I was just like "no pls poor Nini can't move he's hurt don't" but you made Tao still be gentle, always watching out what he was doing while teasing and (let's say) caring for Jongin. pretty odd, but I liked that he didn't actually penetrate him, even tho he really really wanted to (so did I). also I agree to all the other precious comments about the perfectly hilarious nicknames and the way they tease each other! but I want to add that I liked the character of Dr. Do the most bc reasons and newly discovered kinks thx. I'm really looking forward to read more of you (I didn't manage to do so yet...) and thank you for writing this beautiful story and for being my friend :) <3

[eoryndal]

Argh, I'm never too sure about the line between r and nc-17. There's certainly "sexually-oriented nudity" (isn't that nicely worded by the MPAA? xD ) but I felt like it wasn't strong enough for nc-17 /shrugs Do you know a rule of thumb for ratings?

Nooo, just thinking about Jongin having rough sex in his injured state makes me cringe from the imagined pain >.< Tao wouldn't take care of Jongin so mindfully only to throw it all out of the window for a quick fuck.

Writing them tease each other was so much fun, I'm glad you had fun too reading it.

/whispers If I may tell you a secret, they're going to have lots and lots of penetrative sex as soon as Jongin's leg is fully healed and he can give Tao that private lapdance or two or ten because he loves riding Tao, hehehe

And another secret is that Dr. Do and Mr. Byun the nurse are totally fucking, lmao

Also, if that kink you discovered happens to be medical kink, hit me up on Twitter and I'll link you the medical kink SuKai I wrote, if you don't mind the pairing. If that's not it, forget I ever said this xD

Take all the time you need to read whichever of my stories sound appealing to you <3 I hope I find the time to read yours soon! Thank you for reading and commenting, and for being my friend, too ^^