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#140: The Story of Us

Jan 10, 2017 20:19

Title: The Story Of Us
Pairing: Jongin / Chanyeol (mentioned side ChenHun)
Rating: PG-13
Length: 10,814 words
Warning(s): [Please click to open.]age gap (Chanyeol is 7 years older), pining, and all the clichés
Summary: Coffee shop!au. Songwriter Chanyeol has a crush on the part-time barista who works in the cafe across the road from his apartment.
Author's Note: Much ( Read more... )

round one, rating: pg13, pairing: jongin/chanyeol

Comments 3

this is why i love chankai so much.... zaraaki January 11 2017, 04:09:46 UTC

chankai..chankai..chankai...

well..how do i start.... it kinda hit like a slow start at the beginning.. (ifeelitwasslowerformykindaofpace...maybe its not for the others...SORRY~)
then the story just grew..then somehow i appreciate the pace more..it kinda give space and time for you to take it all in....
the characters and the details just works. I love love love the inner talk of jongin and chanyeol....esp when chanyeol was figuring out abt his work and changed it to make something abt jongin...
and i definitely love chanyeol's adoration for jongin....the way he just notice everything about jongin...esp abt his smile and how gorgeous jongin is (YES CHANYEOL I GET YOU! his smile *i died*)

So definitely such a great read..! thank you author-nim for sharing and for the ever so so sweeeet chankai! Fighting!

caterplina January 12 2017, 13:59:47 UTC

oh what a lovely pair of idiots!
i loved their pinning. you had me saying out loud "Agh! can't you tell??" to chanyeol when jongin was about to say something and stopped lol
this was really cute and i enjoyed it a lot ^^ it's nice to read cute chankai haha

teatimetaemint January 12 2017, 15:48:24 UTC

I really really really loved the mood of this story. It was so warm and soothing, like a cup of hot chocolate after a long day of work. The way you wrote this had me smiling fondly more than once, even if I felt the occasional urge to shake both of them for being so blind! (But that's the beauty of mutual pining fics LOL feeling the frustration, but anticipating the moment when they'll finally clue in on the fact that they're both head over heels for each other ( ... )