How's My Driving?

This is the crit page for Uzumaki Naruto played in the game mayfield_rpg. The anon commenting is left ON and so I welcome any comments whether they be critical or positive. IP logging is OFF. Thanks ( Read more... )

[He's mumbling and walking around and really very confused right now] All I did was go to sleep for a little while and the whole town is freaking out!

... What's going on?

Is everyone-- The last thing I really, really remember is being older-- I'm confused! What's going on? Does anyone know? Has everything turned crazy!?!

[A twenty-six year old Naruto sits out on the grass in front of his house, picking at the grass]

Did everyone already make plans for Christmas...? I thought maybe-- Luke, Giriko? Should we do something like a family? I'll bet that would make this damn place happy, don't you think?

[pausesMeriken I still have to give you your present! As a thanks ( Read more... )

[Have some 5 year old Naruto wandering the streets in front of his house looking really confused before he plops down on his lawn at 947 Beulah Street]

U-uh, hello?

[he's looking up and down the streetHey! Can- can anyone hear me!? I'm trying to get home but I can't see to find it... can anyone tell me where the Hokage tower is? I can't find it ( Read more... )

[You can hear him running back and fourth over the room, panting a little as he grumbles under his breath a moment]

Hey! Hey you bastards! [panting] Hey you bastards! Where the Hell am I!? You stupid assholes think you can just lock me up and-- and what? You think I'm just going to be quiet?!

[momentary silence]

Where the hell am I?

Hey!! ( Read more... )