Gakuen Heaven > Fanfic/Drabbles > Cracktacular Plot Bunnies (set 2)

[kagayachou]

Title: Cracktacular Plot Bunnies (set 2)
Authors: kagayachou
Fandom: Gakuen Heaven
Characters: Hideaki, Hiroya, Kaoru, Kazuki, Kazuki's secretary, Keita, Kouji, Kuma-chan, Satoshi, Shunsuke, Takuto, Tetsuya, Tetsuya's Dad, Tono-sama, Omi, Jin, Yukihiko
Rating: some mix-n-match degree of G to NC-17
Words: O_O this could go on forever...
Summary: Inspired from

Comments

Yeah!!

[bunnyhop777]

Oooh, I have been looking forward to another one of these! Thank you thank you!
:bows slightly:

And you even added more of Itou Keita JUST for me! How thoughtful of you!
:glomps kagayachou:
(I love 52 and 84.... 97 is hilarious!)
<3

Re: Yeah!!

[kagayachou]

Oh, so it was you who left the anonymous message about there being not enough Keita in the last set? Haha, this time I kept telling myself "Write more about Keita... and- and Umino-sensei, because you wrote more about Tono-sama!" that I ended up almost forgetting about Shinomiya, who needs more love ^^

52 and 84? I take it you like Kaoru and the slightly-more-canon-like sentences rather than the really strange ones XD

Thanks!

Re: Yeah!!

[bunnyhop777]

Oops! I was exposed! (Tries desperately to cover identity)O_O

Come to think of it, I like 95 as well.
You know what? You're right about one thing; I like the sentences about Kaoru. You write him so well.
You need to write me a story about Kaoru. I think I'm falling in love with him. Seriously. <3

[angelintercept]

96 made me shriek with laughter! Nothing compares to the wrongness of that one.

I like your idea of writing one sentence for each; you did a good job of repesenting each scene in so few words. Some of the sentences are constructed in a way that makes them a little confusing, but, other than that, I'm impressed.

[kagayachou]

Your fluffy cat icon is so fitting, given the contents of 96. XD

If you have the time and feel inclined, would it be all right if you could point out which sentences seem confusing? I posted this without a beta but stared at the sentences so long I can't quite tell right now ^^; Thank you.

[angelintercept]

LOL, yeah, that's why I chose it! Although, I wouldn't like to think of that cat doing something similar to Kirsten Dunst... hahaha O.o Sounds like something that would happen on South Park

[kagayachou]

Oh, yes, that was very helpful. I (hopefully) fixed the sentences up now, rewording 55 and 78 in particular, as well as clarifying 75 a bit. 59, yup, I took out the '...' and let it stand. Thank you very much ^_^

Side note: I have no idea what Tono-sama did to Niwa, but... XD

[summerbreeze21]

I love the way you say so much with just a few words. ♥

The ones with Tono-sama are so amusing. XD

[kagayachou]

*koff* Sometimes I wonder if I say too much...

Thank you <3

[lyntek]

Oh. Oooh.

You're making me really want Niwa's Dad/Saionji now T_T;

Such lovely shorts ♥ Thanks for sharing!

[kagayachou]

Wow, and here I thought I was the only one XD

Thank you for reading and commenting ^_^

[karinablue_rose]

I love 082 "Mobile Phone" with Keita and Omi,084 "Love" and 095 "Heaven" with Keita and Kaoru.I would love to see someone expand on those three groups of sentences.