Comments | kae_nine: Ficlet: Keep Breathing (1/4 in the Breathing series)

kae_nine

Ficlet: Keep Breathing (1/4 in the Breathing series)

Jun 30, 2008 18:55

Title: Keep Breathing
Series: Breathing - Story 1/4
Author: Kaethel (
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series: breathing, rose tyler, doctor who, ten/rose, doctor who series 4, tenth doctor, fanfic, angst, fanfic: keep breathing, episode: the stolen earth, captain jack harkness, donna noble

Comments 21

catsfiction June 30 2008, 17:54:05 UTC

Beautifully done. You really capture Rose's loving generosity of spirit in her acceptance of Donna and her concern - always uppermost in her mind - for the Doctor's needs. The whole thing is beautifully observes and brings that scene vividly to life. I'm really eager to see your next three pieces!

kae_nine June 30 2008, 18:35:57 UTC

As a fan of your writing I'm even more overwhelmed by your compliments. Wow. Thank you so much! :))))))

sprdr June 30 2008, 18:22:32 UTC

God this is breathtaking; your fic really threw me back to those last minutes... You certainly can make us feel Rose's anxiousness and despair... Brilliant job, as always !

kae_nine June 30 2008, 18:37:14 UTC

Awwww. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I wrote this series of fics as catharsis to help me deal with the anticipation for next week's episode. I'm terrified by what RTD has up his sleeve, so hey, I *had* to do something. ;) Delighted you enjoyed it! :)

chandramas June 30 2008, 18:56:14 UTC

DARN, I HATE YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I didn't cry during the episode but DARN this hurt so much more!!!!!!!!

kae_nine June 30 2008, 19:02:53 UTC

Sorry. *grins* (no, really, I'm sorry... I'm just as sorry as RTD was 'honest' in the last minute of the Confidential ;))

chandramas June 30 2008, 19:14:57 UTC

I love that kind of honest people

*Chandramas mumbles a lot of improper words.

kae_nine June 30 2008, 19:16:45 UTC

LOL! I can hear you... ;)

trustme1013 June 30 2008, 19:13:10 UTC

I came this far, and I’m still going to lose him. I spent so much time thinking about him, about the two of us together again, I’ve missed him so much, and he’s regenerating right in front of me before we’ve had time to get reacquainted with what we used to share, before I can tell him that I love him every bit as much as I did when the breach closed itself.

This... this was amazing. This is exactly as I see it happening in her head. I can't wait to see what else you do with this. Oh my lord, I'm crying on the inside!

kae_nine June 30 2008, 19:17:23 UTC

*blushes* Thank you! :)))))

salimali June 30 2008, 19:37:29 UTC

Aww this was just beautiful , it made me cry again (only just stopped from the ep!)

kae_nine July 1 2008, 20:15:52 UTC

Still haven't stopped since the ep. Of course, since I'm a glutton for punishment and keep rewatching that scene, it's not like it's gonna get better. ;)