Fic: Untitled, James/Sirius, NC17

[kabeyk]

A belated birthday present. This one’s a bit random, and, as in real life, I think it's best if you ignore the nonsensical plot and just enjoy the sex.

Title: Someone think of a title for me, please.
Pairing: James/Sirius
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Not mine.

For sethkyne_blue's birthday:

Comments

[wildestranger]

That was the hottest of the hot! No one write fightsex like you do.

Although I really wanted Remus to walk in on them and show them how it's done...

[tesseract_5]

*falls over dead at the idea*

[kabeyk]

I was so tempted to, honestly. Seriously.

Thank you.

kxx

[tesseract_5]

was tempted? can we change the tense on that? >:-)

[dramaphile]

Excuse me while I wipe up this puddle of drool on my desk. This has rendered me pretty incoherent and I am now wondering if I have time for a cold shower before I head off to work for the day. nunngh.

But seriously, the dynamic is great and the scene is fucking hot in all the best ways and Sirius/James in general makes me squee happily

*gropes you*

[kabeyk]

Heh, you're just off to work and I'm about to go to bed. This never ceases to amaze me.

Ooh, more groping.x

Thank you.

kxx

[sethkyne_blue]

Oh my god.
Happy birthday to me!

*drops dead*

Oh, that was so harsh and dirty and painful and angry and so, so SEXY. I adore this pairing because they are constantly posturing, constantly trying to push the other out of the way and come out on top.

This paragraph did it for me:
Sirius pulled one arm back and swung for another punch, but James' arms were free too and he managed to roll the both of them over. Half on top, he hitched a knee between Sirius' legs, trying to get Sirius' arms above his head but meeting too much resistance. Unable to completely control Sirius, he instead pushed his hips forward, feeling the solid rub of Sirius' cock and glorying in the way Sirius collapsed limply backwards and groaned.

And this:
'Fuck,’ Sirius muttered, but James ignored him and wriggled himself even closer, starting to move his hips. Still angry, Sirius plunged his teeth once again into James' neck before jerking quickly and climbing on top again with a snarl that sounded to James' ears more like pure lust than anything else. He

[kabeyk]

Well I hope it cheered up the post-birthday blues, heh. Soz.

I'm sure it can't be good for me, writing all this vicious, angry sex, but then maybe it's theraputic or something. Yeep.

I'm very glad you liked it, thank you very much.

kxxx

rrrowr

[tesseract_5]

really excellent, I'd vote for even more rough play in the beginning, I'd love to read how the boys got the injuries they ended up with mid-way through.

really, you hit about all my kinks with this one, love love love it.

er, title? Rough Play? Only a Boyish Fight? No More Pretending? I'm crap at titles, sorry :)

Re: rrrowr

[kabeyk]

Yeah, see, when I started writing it, I started before the fight, but then they just kept talking and faffing instead of getting on with the fight and the sex, so I had to cut a lot of it.

Aww, thank you so much.

I'm totally rubbish at titles and usually give in and just use some completely irrelevant song lyrics or something, argh. I think the last three fics I've written were untitled.

kxx

[thrupenny]

Oh my dear god. You write the best fight-sex ever. I loved the power-play between the two and that Sirius is such a complete bastard in the beginning.

‘Just jealous, were you?’ Sirius whispered, hotly against his ear. ‘Thought I would want Moony and not you as well?’

Guh. So, so hot.

[kabeyk]

Yay for bastard!Sirius, how we all love him!

Thank you.

kxx