Fic: Territory, Remus/Sirius, R

[kabeyk]

Okay, this one was supposed to be a drabble, but it got way out of hand. It isn’t quite what was asked for, sorry. Sometime I will try and write something hotter, with lots of tension and denial and all that.

For coconutswirl:

Title: Territory
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: R

Summary: Sirius is very fond of his flat, the only problem being that Remus is

Comments

[minnow_53]

Hi, doing well. Official comment: I don't like Remus having it off with some French person, but apart from that I loved it.

^_^xxx

[kabeyk]

Ha! You know perfectly well that I have almost no control over Remus, and that he bloody well does what he likes!

kxxx

[spessartine]

I very nearly snorted coffee over my monitor at this bit:

these men tended towards an instantaneous and very-great dislike of Sirius immediately on meeting him, so it was quite normal for him to drink his coffee in the midst of mutual, silent glowering.

Men, eh? And Sirius helping Remus in the bath was just about the sweetest thing I ever did see. Bless him. Aw, bless you, too. God, this was exactly the sort of fic I wanted to read today.

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you.x

Coffee is not well-liked by computers, sadly.

kxx

[ramen_addict]

Yay! I loved the whole thing, but especially the little bit about Remus saying Robert "Frenchly", because it's so much more fun than "the French way".

[kabeyk]

Hee, it so is. Thank you.x

kxx

[thrupenny]

And sometimes he would have to throw all dignity and masculinity to the wind and just tell Remus how much they all loved him and how everything would be all right, and stroke his hair until he fell asleep.

That's so incredibly sweet. I love clueless, in-denial Sirius. And I liked that Remus didn't back off when Siris freaked out about being kissed - I love a Remus whose sure of himself and just a bit sneaky. Sirius, bless him, never really stood a chance did he? Completely lovely from beginning to end!

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you.x I must be a closet soppy-person, because I never mean to write lines like that, they just happen somehow.

kxx

[cepebpo]

I love the smatterings of humour.. like "feety-ball" -- hehe. This was very much like reading a Nick Hornby-authored Sirius/Remus fic. You're a great modern writer with your own flair. Well loved, and shall be added to my memories!

[kabeyk]

I think 'feety-ball' is the funniest thing ever, even though it's my own joke. Which is rather sad.

And thank you! Being compared to a male author has to be a good thing when I'm trying to write boys, even though I haven't read a lot of Nick Hornby's stuff.

kxx