Gift fic for maayacola

Jul 19, 2012 00:35

Title: Between the Lines
Pairing/Characters: Ryo/Uchi
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Notes: Dear maayacola I hope you enjoy this ♥ A huge thanks to my betas and one general super-hero.
Summary: Things change, even between the best of friends.

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p: ryo/uchi

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lilly0 July 18 2012, 20:12:33 UTC
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OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!!
This was amazing! I was totally breathless while reading this!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS! <3
RyoUchi awkwardness, RyoUchi misunderstanding (not only Ryo needs to learn to communicate better, maybe Uchi should learn a bit about that too? ^^), RyoUchi hot sex!
Thanks so much for sharing this <3

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yuumei_nata July 26 2012, 12:47:04 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it ♥

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phrenk July 18 2012, 21:21:14 UTC
Wahhh, this is wonderful. ♥

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yuumei_nata July 26 2012, 12:47:15 UTC
Thank you~

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maayacola July 19 2012, 03:31:53 UTC
Hi! Okay, first of all, this was adorable! I love my Ryo at championship levels of clueless, so this was right up my alley!

I guess I'll dive in with things I liked!

The UST, anon, was fantastic! I really like UST-- it's the best part of a romance!! :D And you've got lots of it here!

He resists the urge to touch, turning his head away to check the name of the next station. In my opinion, it starts here. I loved this, because that feeling is so identifiable-- That... desire to touch, that's not quite acceptable ~~ Delicious.

and here D: As Uchi kisses Ryo’s cheek with a giggled thanks his breath dies in his throat. Poor Ryo #huggles

Then there are the kisses, wet and sloppy ones on his cheek, brief and tickling on his neck, warm and breathy against his ear. TT______TT koreantears for Ryo, who's suffering, the poor dear. That kind of intimacy is hard to deal with when you want more.

And then you revealed that they'd had a sexual relationship before! OH! That does change things :(

Ryo stiffens a little, wiggling when the ( ... )

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yuumei_nata July 26 2012, 12:50:45 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this *____* ♥

And as I tweeted you'll get another one as soon as I beat the stupid thing into submission >.>;;

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encoded_panties July 19 2012, 19:26:34 UTC
this is great <3

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yuumei_nata July 26 2012, 12:50:59 UTC
Thank you~!

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pashoshi July 21 2012, 17:15:02 UTC
I do so love it when Ryo is clueless, and also angsty. I especially liked the beginning when Ryo's thinking about how things used to be versus how they are now and wondering if Uchi sticks with him out of habit, and how Ryo plans a fancy date and then they end up not even going anywhere. XD

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yuumei_nata July 26 2012, 12:51:44 UTC
I felt like the date part was something Ryo would fail to do >.>;;

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