Gift fic for maayacola

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Title: Between the Lines
Pairing/Characters: Ryo/Uchi
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None.
Notes: Dear maayacola I hope you enjoy this ♥ A huge thanks to my betas and one general super-hero.
Summary: Things change, even between the best of friends.

Comments

[maayacola]

Hi! Okay, first of all, this was adorable! I love my Ryo at championship levels of clueless, so this was right up my alley!

I guess I'll dive in with things I liked!

The UST, anon, was fantastic! I really like UST-- it's the best part of a romance!! :D And you've got lots of it here!

He resists the urge to touch, turning his head away to check the name of the next station. In my opinion, it starts here. I loved this, because that feeling is so identifiable-- That... desire to touch, that's not quite acceptable ~~ Delicious.

and here D: As Uchi kisses Ryo’s cheek with a giggled thanks his breath dies in his throat. Poor Ryo #huggles

Then there are the kisses, wet and sloppy ones on his cheek, brief and tickling on his neck, warm and breathy against his ear. TT______TT koreantears for Ryo, who's suffering, the poor dear. That kind of intimacy is hard to deal with when you want more.

And then you revealed that they'd had a sexual relationship before! OH! That does change things :(

Ryo stiffens a little, wiggling when the memories of him and Uchi in bed together, of him telling Uchi he’d like something more in an unsure voice, of the heart-breaking silence that followed. this is pretty and angsty and lovely, and I really like the image as much as it makes me quiver T_T

BUT THEN THERE IS RECONCILIATION. AND PORN!

The porn is great! I especially liked that there was a newness tangles with the familiarity... I like that a lot. Uchi’s body is familiar enough to him now, and even though it’s been five years after the first slightly awkward time his body can still remember what he learned then. THIS. It's just lovely, and Ryo and Uchi are like that, and yes, Maia loves it <3

Thank you for this fic, anon! It was really great! <3

--Maia

[yuumei_nata]

I'm so glad you liked this *____* ♥

And as I tweeted you'll get another one as soon as I beat the stupid thing into submission >.>;;