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What She Doesn't See (G)

Feb 12, 2009 22:06

Title: What She Doesn't See
Author: justthismorning
Rating: G
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin pre-slash
Summary: She sees another plan fail and another friend crushed under Uther's hate.
A/N: Prequel(?) That Which We Leave Unspoken 'verse. It takes place (chronologically) before the series. I know, I know. Hiatus. but my brain is leaking out of my ears and this was ( Read more... )

verse: that which we, pairing: arthur/merlin, genre: general, rating: g, fandom: merlin

Comments 13

willow_fae_20 February 13 2009, 03:26:00 UTC

*cracks whip* I don't want you to fail out of your classes. I ♥ U BB!!! You know that.

p.s. I might be writing a Wee!Fallen!Cas!Fic. That I probably won't post anywhere 'cause maychorian already did a verse but I can't get it out of my brain. So I'll definitely share it with you

Also they re-aired 'Yellow Fever' tonight (for Supernatural) and they included Jensen's 'Thigh of the Tiger' at the end, just like in the original airing.

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:31:03 UTC

I finished my JavaScript assignment! SQUEEEE!!!! now to study for the four tests and complete the three assignments I have next week. LOL!

I wish I could have watched it *pout*

wee!fallen!Cas!fic? Intriguing.

willow_fae_20 February 14 2009, 01:35:36 UTC

So what's that; 1 down 7 to go... I♥U BB

I've already got a prompt for you. *whistles innocently*

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:40:21 UTC

wahhh, I want it now, but I can't! I'm helping a friend with her code. It's killing us all. The good thing is that we get reading week after next week *relieved sigh*

Thread 5

fresica February 13 2009, 03:59:38 UTC

You managed to humanize Nimueh a bit here, even after reading the series. I actually almost, almost feel a little sympathy for her.

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:34:02 UTC

almost is the key word, isn't it? Never want to feel TOO much for a villain.
Thanks. :)

callistianstar February 13 2009, 04:24:51 UTC

It is much easier to sympathize with Nimueh here, though had she heard Arthur's words, I personally would have been even angrier at Merlin. But it is easier to understand why she really wanted to hurt Merlin with this [knowing she'd be getting to a Pendragon as well], especially since she didn't hear Merlin's cry. Not that I don't love Merlin and Arthur. I do. But seeing what she's seen and knows, I can't blame her for her actions, though ignorance isn't exactly an excuse. Lovely job with this. I'm glad to have seen his prequel. I like it when people make evil more...gray.

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:36:41 UTC

I like the grey tones of life. Evil wasn't born that way, it was created. And I understand why she's so rageful.

I tried hard to blur the lines (and as much as I love Merlin and Arthur), so I'm glad it worked.

Thank you!

laurapetri February 13 2009, 04:53:30 UTC

I feel her pain really but baitch needs to be taken down

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:37:26 UTC

She does, doesn't she? Unfortunately I'm not great at revenge/killing fics, so it's not going to be included in this 'verse. But thanks for stopping by :)

archaeologist_d February 13 2009, 13:18:10 UTC

This was great. I love that Merlin's reaction is so conflicted. Arthur may be saying those things but Merlin really knows different.

Wonderful.

justthisfic February 14 2009, 01:39:18 UTC

I just keep thinking of what Merlin must be thinking in the series. Poor Merlin.

Thank you