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just_smth

A/R drabbles

May 31, 2009 00:07

Just four little drabbles I'd written. And many thanks to injuredathlete for beta and making them look better than I ever could.
Raiting: K
Timeline: First one is set between seasons 2 and 3 and I'm not sure about the others, but no spoilers.

( My yet another attempt at writing )

bsg, fic, adama/roslin

Comments 18

gentlehobbit May 30 2009, 22:17:33 UTC

I like these very much. They are not dramatic or very romantic, but they are quiet wonderings, thoughts, feelings of two people very much drawn together. Your ficlets really evoke that quieter, more compelling nature of their relationship. Not the desperate drama of Hollywoodish characters, but the calm intensity of those who know they love.

just_smth May 30 2009, 22:59:06 UTC

Thank you. And yes, I hope there was no Hollywood drama in here. It was just my attempt to get a glimpse into their heads before "I love you"s were said aloud. Hope I succeeded at least a little bit.
And since you like it, then I did

whatever_lj May 30 2009, 22:20:59 UTC

These are your first? Hey, hey, hey -- a new star on the rise! Wonderful stuff -- please consider yourself encouraged to add more!

just_smth May 30 2009, 23:01:31 UTC

*blushes* My fourth actually. And my beta deserves at least half a credit. Anyway. Thank you! :)

guavathething May 30 2009, 22:32:19 UTC

These are fantastic, especially #4! I think it was in Crossroads when I noticed that Laura essentially had a place of sorts at the CIC table thingy, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who likes it when she's chilling in CIC.

I hope you write more! :)

just_smth May 30 2009, 23:06:51 UTC

Thank you!
And yes, Laura does frequent CIC, doesn't she? And since it's certainly not in her job description, well... And yeah, you are not the only one. I think we are at the same page with Bill also. :)

i_am_davnee May 30 2009, 23:15:16 UTC

I love the image of him keeping Dark Day tucked away safe for her, because it is hers, rather than on the shelf. These are very nice. You are off to a great start with your writing!

just_smth May 30 2009, 23:22:36 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you like d them.
And I'd just thought that Bill wouldn't just quietly accept the return of his gift (or Laura's death it was symbolizing). So he quietly rebelled :)

zaleti May 31 2009, 05:17:28 UTC

I really like the contemplative tone of these. Thoughts = win. I really really like the 'twist' of sorts in #1. And I just LOVE the idea of Laura collecting 'excuse reports'. :)

just_smth May 31 2009, 07:24:01 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you do.
And those two are just full of thoughts and ideas. I'm just a faithful but unworthy follower :)