Theory Of Convergence: Veronica Mars: V/L

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Theory Of Convergence
[13] Patience Is A Virtue

This is part two of two.

Part one is here.

Comments

[afrocurl]

I like my personal canon for that last sentence better. ;) It would be awesome, to reference another fic I think you've read.

Your ways with UST continue to amaze me--especially the push and pull these two go through each and every time they share the same space.

[tlace]

Your ways with UST continue to amaze me...
Just you wait sweetheart, just you wait MUWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! ;)

And thank you *hugs* I hope you know how much I value your input!!

[afrocurl]

Just what I needed (do I need to keep playing "Razor" by Foo Fighters as I read?)

No problem.

If you get the next few back from Heather before you leave work, I might be able to get the other set back to you by Friday.

[tlace]

Haha NO, no Razor! FYI Heather was absolutely GIDDY after her first read-through of my next chapters "best ever" to directly quote. Take from that what you will.

Cool. I'll see where Heather's at with them, although I do know she had some big plans today, bridesmaid dress shopping for her wedding, so we'll see. And if it's next week that's fine too. The two chapters are in the hopper and that's all I need to relieve my stress.

[p2880]

This chapter is awesome! Both true to their characters and true to their ages. Both of them just trying to navigate normal life without the drama to come that TV demands. The scene on the porch is one of the best I've ever read. Kudos to you!

[tlace]

Thank you for your always supportive comments (I cherish the fact that you think they read true) and for sticking with me/my fic even when its MONTHS between updates :D

[pegm81484]

Well that was heartbreaking... any sign of this getting any sunnier in the next two chapters??

[pegm81484]

Oh by the way it was also awesome, just really heartbreaking lol.

[tlace]

Thank you! So glad you liked it!

[tlace]

Yes. There is a sign. And it comes VERY soon :)

[a_h_c]

I think Veronica wishing that Celeste would just take care of the Kane kids never coming back is also something that your readers probably feel (I know I do). All this back and forth and you just want them to find a way, dammit! Stupid Kanes. Urgh. And poor Logan. He gets it (and a part of him agrees with Veronica), but he still hates it. Gotta admit, I was proud of him for walking away and not unleashing the snark on Veronica in response. This Veronica would not be well equipped to handle it. And it showed that Logan can think ahead a bit and not solely react by reflex.

Glad you had a spurt of creativity and wrote some more of this. I'm looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters! Whoo!

[tlace]

Even I wish that Celeste would move the Kane kids to Bali Bali or somewhere so our beloved couple could be together, so you're not alone there :)

Thanks for the feedback, you're always so nice to me :) And the next two chapters are at the beta for a final once-over as I type this :)

[annie_oakley]

You know, I saved this fic for my HAPPY piece after reading and update of another fic where Veronica is dead and Logan accused of murdering her and I think this is actually the harder one to read, because:

So after an evening of watching her, seeing Veronica completely immersed in her element - unguarded and open - Logan is even more intrigued by her and wondering if it was him or being at home that gave her the courage to admit what she’s been keeping in all this time. But as he sits with her nestled into the curve of his arm, her head on his shoulder, he comes to the conclusion that it really doesn’t matter because he’s done for; nothing that either of them does or says, not even the Kane’s return - however it turns out - will change how he feels about Veronica.
AHHHH, I think this is the first chapter where the anvil hit that this is PRE-SERIES and everything that happened after Lilly's death is imminent. And that hurts, hurts, hurts

[tlace]

I REALLY appreciate this, more than you may ever know!!
AHHHH, I think this is the first chapter where the anvil hit that this is PRE-SERIES and everything that happened after Lilly's death is imminent. And that hurts, hurts, hurts.

But this? OMG ANNIE I know you're frustrated but this nearly brought me to tears from the compliment!!:
The UST in this is incredible, and you have such a way with descriptions. Probably the best I've ever read in VM fic. I love this and feel frustrated with it all at the same time. KUDOS!

I do promise some happy for you!! Mark my words!