fic: maybe, maybe i got a reason

Aug 14, 2011 18:29

Title:  Maybe, Maybe I Got A Reason
Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Author: just_drifting_6
Pairings/Characters: Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Season six finale
Disclaimer: Grey's Anatomy does not belong to me.
Author's Notes: I was rewatching their scenes in these episodes again and it finally hit me what they were all about. So I wrote it. First ever Grey's fanfic ( Read more... )

character: arizona robbins, character: callie torres, fandom: greys anatomy, pairing: callie/arizona

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funkyshaz57 August 14 2011, 09:53:27 UTC
Thought it was nice really well written while I didn't exactly agree with certain sentiments like this

'Show me you love me,' and 'Prove I'm special' and all her other demands" - Because I don't think she was unjustified in wanting to believe Callie actually thought she was different from anyone else I still enjoyed it

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janice2010 August 14 2011, 10:20:44 UTC
A beautiful piece of writing! :-)

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:52:01 UTC
Thank you :)

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:51:29 UTC
Thank you.

I do believe Arizona was justified in her demands, though I tend to side with Callie on the baby issue. I think what I was trying to portray with those lines were how scared Arizona is for Callie in that scene, and so sort of explain the out-of-the-blue decision she made at the end of the episode.

At the same time, I am still getting to know these characters, so I'm bound to make mistakes with regards to their characterisation, so thank you for pointing that out :)

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worldwnomirrors August 14 2011, 10:24:22 UTC
Very, VERY well written. Love it. Is there a part two to this? I would love to read more from you.

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:54:54 UTC
You know, your comment made me realise; I don't think I've ever, in my life, written a sequel to a one-shot. I don't know if I'll start now, but maybe something similar to it if inspiration hits. I've been mostly writing original fic lately, but hopefully this will pave the way for more fanfiction. And thank you so much for reading!

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worldwnomirrors August 15 2011, 16:47:43 UTC
Well, I really like your style of writing, so if you don't continue this I really hope you write another fan fic about Callie and Arizona :)

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strandedinaber August 14 2011, 10:36:12 UTC
Beautiful writing! I love this - I too can totally understand Arizona's insecurities, and your exploration of Callie's bravery in the season 6 finale as "proof" but not really, is very true. You capture the characters' perspectives brilliantly; Arizona thinking in that moment that her demands are stupid and ridiculous because she thinks they put Callie in danger.

Sure, it’s a big commitment, and yes, she's terrified out of her mind, but today Callie has proven that she will do anything for Arizona, and now Arizona is ready to do the same for her. ♥

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:52:42 UTC
Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

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neolithicdream August 14 2011, 13:48:04 UTC
You should definitely write more of this. Well done.

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:55:46 UTC
Thank you! I don't think I'll continue this specific fic, but hopefully I will write more Callie/Arizona in the future.

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englishstrawbie August 14 2011, 16:29:16 UTC
Lovely writing! I really like you're style and the way you put yourself into the scene with them. You really got inside both of their minds.

Welcome to the C/A comm, I really hope you share more of your writing with us soon!

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just_drifting_6 August 15 2011, 08:57:17 UTC
Thank you so much :) Everyone seems so lovely here. I feel like sometimes my writing style works, and other times it's doesn't, so I'm glad you thought it worked in this instance, and that you think I got inside their minds is a huge compliment since I'm still getting to know the characters.

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