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just_being_me08

I Don't Believe You - Part 1

Jan 03, 2010 02:19

Title: I Don’t Believe You - Part One

Rating: NC-17

Characters: John, Jack

Pairings: Jack/John

Spoilers: None what so ever.

Summary: Discarded and alone above the streets of Cardiff John Hart has nothing left but to live in the past, more specifically the troubled past he shared with Jack Harkness as Time Agents…

Disclaimer: Regrettably I own nothing ( Read more... )

jack harkness, naddypants, john hart, torchwood, jack/john, fanfic, nc-17

Comments 6

51stcenturyfox January 3 2010, 03:03:50 UTC

Oh, nice, I like AUs with them quite a lot!

John is nicely characterised and the action is great. :D

The nanobots were a really good twist, as well! :)

imshi January 3 2010, 08:20:41 UTC

lovely. that was so brilliant. guh... you're such a good writer!
and john's characterisation is really really good.

treacle_tartlet January 3 2010, 11:34:52 UTC

Wheee! I want to see what a good wife John can be!

pirate4evrnavy2 January 4 2010, 02:55:07 UTC

*drools*

jacksgirleen January 6 2010, 13:52:29 UTC

Oh very interesting... I'm looking forward to reading more.