Hurt Me With Nothing - Phantoms Never Sleep 9/?

[just_being_me08]

Title: Hurt Me With Nothing - Phantoms Never Sleep 9/?

Rating: I like to swear so 15???

Characters: Jack/Ianto, Rest of the team, new group of alien nasties.
Chapters:  Sequel to “Don’t You Wish You Were Dead Like Me?”

Spoilers: Set series one, post ‘’Cyberwoman”, but anything Torchwood could be hinted at.

Summary: When Ianto suddenly falls

Comments

[naddypants]

Those first two parts were utterly heartbreaking. I honestly don't know how you do it! They were seriously fab!
Jack...that really made my eyes water. :( Poor boy. He needs Ianto back.

And that Ianto passage was so so soooooo wonderfully written, I'm serious! I loved the structure, and the way the words flowed...and Ianto's emotions.

But he's not going to die? Is he?

Have they found the solution? OMG please, you're killing me here!

And YAY Tosh! :)

*coffee, cake, oh I think JM is about somewhere too...* xD

naddy
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[just_being_me08]

They were? *dances* I mean yay, I got it right! :D:D Thank you!
The Jack part made me feel a bit evil though, what do I put these guys through? :S

Oh thanks! I wanted one last dream sequence for Ianto and so Taa-daaa here it appeared. But honestly, I am so proud that I managed to capture those emotions though, it was so bloody hard!!

Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.............. :P

It looks like it yes, but then again, they've done that before. And they are against the clock now.... :P

Good old Tosh though, she is a genius! :D

*munches on cake.*Ooooo look! *grabs JM* found him! Haha JM ftw! *dances*

Thankies soooooo much sweetie!!!!!!

Si
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[naddypants]

Of course they were!!! :)
Yeah...poor sods. But it is so brilliant! I'm addicted!

Awww well the dream scenes were nice...well...sort of, if you know what I mean (sorry mind is mush as I've been listening to the new JB song :P). But yeah, it was brilliant! Really really! This series keeps getting better!

Yeah. Bloody hell,they better get cracking on how they're going to find him! Can't be good at all! :S
I hope they gets him back!

Haha yeah. She is bless her. I'm guna miss her in S3...:(

Haha YAY for JM!!! :)

*joins in dancing*

Aww it's no problem. Just being honest dear!!!

naddy
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[just_being_me08]

Well I'm glad to have you addicted, otherwise what would I do without these brilliant comments? :P

I do know what you mean, or at least the one where he was happy was quite nice, the others were all a bit evil. (OMG his new song is the sex!) Thank you! The series is such a bitch to write, but then again it does feel worth it.

Well I couldn't possibly say. I guess I'll just have to keep on writing :P

Same here! It wont be the same without our lovely Toshie.

*does JM dance*

Well I adore your honesty my dear!! Which reminds me, when am I going to be astounded by your next fic?

Sisi
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[hab318princess]

Yes, that is a cliff hanger! - Thanks.

And a fantastic story - heartbreaking, absolutely heartbreaking!

Waiting impatiently for the next part!

[just_being_me08]

Haha yay, I haven't brkoken the tradition of the series yet then :P

But thanks so much! I'm really glad I managed to get that across. :)

They'll be more soon honest. :D

[morgia]

Hooo Ma fabuleuse Sian,
Thank you so much to dedicate this chapter for me !!!Wow, really, that mean a lot, just a little thought but its like you give me a big hug ;)
About your chapter, I love it ! You described very well the darkness, the purgatory where Ianto stand. Its hard to write about sensation, about nothingness but you did it well. I really enjoy to read suspense and I often disappointed after few chapters. You keep me hooked because I have no idea how you gonna fix this. Its brilliant, its smart and when I read you I can see you worked hard. So don't worry and keep writing !!!!
Merci encore ma belle pour le happy birthday
Big hugs and gros calins
Nadine
Friend and fan
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[just_being_me08]

Yay, you liked it! I wanted to have it written in time for your birthday but my college work got in the way. :( I'm really glad that you liked it though, it is the least I can do for all the support you've given me! *big hug*

I'm so pleased that you loved this chapter too! The darkness was really hard to describe like you said its hard to write about nothing. And I'm keeping you hooked? Yes! I'm especially proud of that since its one of the hardest things to do I think. I will keep writing though, I couldn't stop now.

Ne pas de problem ma chere :)

Big hugs and gros calin pour vous aussi!
Sian
Your very happy friend!
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[morgia]

Pssssst Sian, stop to write vous when you speak to me, vous in French its a polite way to speak to one person or its for more to one. I feel so old when you wrote vous... lol Please, write tu, its more friendly ;)

[just_being_me08]

Ahhh yes I'm sorry, I forget that bit. I blame my french teachers who used to be so mean to me when I said tu! I'll try to remember though! :P

Sian
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[skullgirl013]

When I heard you telling Sab that you needed something beta'ed I sat on the edge of my seat and have been cheking the coms every 5 seconds until it appeared!
And yet here I am and I can't think of anything to say except wow! I mean you really did blow me away with this chapter!

Right lets get a moving before I go into full gush mode! There will be time for that later! hahah!

so here it is, its back, all fresh and shiny with a new format, yes you heard right our little Jen has finally worked out how to type in HTML *Gasp* but anyways, thats right you guessed it its TOP 3 its back from its break and it look great! Even if I say so myself!

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[just_being_me08]

Hey, you liked it! That is definitely enough for me! :D But awwww thank you, that does mean so very much to me! You are such a sweetie! :D

[skullgirl013]

Yay! I'd hate to think that I was cutting you short!

Same here, I was just messing around and it took me ages before I worked out how to do it without messing up everything! I really ought to be better at all this techy stuff considering how much time I spend on my laptop but I just don't manage it!
But anyways I'm glad you like the new format!

Yup I love your imagery soooo much you know that I do!

You are being very evil to him! *hugs you back* I'm ok and yes you should be proud!

Yes it did hun! It worked briallintly!
Think of it not as a little section that wasn't angsty, think of it as a little ray of sunshine benath all his hopeless dispar!

Haha then its a cliffie!!

You are so welcome hunny! You know how uch I love writting them!

Your not so little reader
Jen
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[morganichele]

AHHHH! Okay, sorry I didn't comment on each chapter, but the moment I started reading this, I couldn't stop. I HAD to click on to the next chapter, and the next.
This is SO good. I love, LOVE LOVE how Jack is fighting so hard for Ianto, and I adore the way Ianto had fought to get back to Jack. I just love them to pieces in this.
And, I am loving Tosh and Gwen, too. They're so supportive and caring in this.
I love the baddies, too. lol. They're SO cold and calculating, and you've delivered that really well.
And, I'll never stop rambling if I don't right now. lol.
But, OH MY GOSH. Stopping here...*cries* I can't wait for the next part.

[just_being_me08]

Haha don't worry sweetie, I appreciate this comment so much! Thank you! I'm glad that I've managed to keep you clicking away :P

But thankies so much. It means so much to me that your enjoying Phantoms. It is nice to write a Janto fic but keep Gwen and Tosh in the picture too. As for the Phantoms, well they are totally bitches but thats why they are so fun to write! :P

Your not rambling, but if you ever fancy it, feel free on my journal. Its built for rambling. :)

*Hugs* There will be more very soon (I hope :P)