The Sweetest Torture - Dare to Hope

[just_being_me08]

Authors Notes: This is our first ever co-written fic series- so please bear this in mind! This series will eventually use the idea of the Seven Deadly Sins, and will contain alternating view points of Jack and Ianto (which basically means one of us is writing Jack, and one of us is writing Ianto). Here, can we also add, this is NOT a Gwen/Jack fic

Comments

[naddypants]

Oh wow. Ianto/Jack face off.
:(
That was sad...but really well written!

I love this ^^,

But er...what's coming through the Rift? :o

[just_being_me08]

Thank you, as long as you liked it, we're happy!!!!!!!

Watch this space!! :D

[crazytook]

still have nothing constructive, but i really liked this line, "“Because I know that I can’t forgive you right now.” Ianto paused, holding back tears. “And I hate myself for that Jack.”"

dont know why, but it's my favorite line of the story so far.

this chapter was enjoyable, albeit a bit melodramatic, but hey, the boys are going through a rough time, yeah?

kudos!
crazytook

[just_being_me08]

Why thank you so much! We're really glad you are still with us and enjoying it!

And yes, the urge to write melodrama when writing angst is very tempting........glad you enjoyed it though!

Thank you! :D

[missthingsplace]

You made me sad ... i don't even want to think about what is coming through the rift!

[just_being_me08]

Arg, the saddness continues! :(
But things can only get worse we're afraid.....
Thank you so much for reading! :D