Irrational Choices - chapter 3

Aug 21, 2008 13:42

Title: Irrational Choices - chapter 3
Pairing: Ryo, OC
Rating: pg-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any JE boys. Or anyone or anything for that matter.
Summary: When the person that matters most to you leaves you and returns after so many years, how do you cope?

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

I told you I would forget about you... )

w: nishikido ryo, @ fan fiction

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epicwaters August 21 2008, 07:31:28 UTC
“Of course. I understand you have concerns regarding the commercial. Have it scheduled with my assistant Ren.”
Ryo got served.
“Let me just clarify one thing. You may be a celebrity, but we are not acquainted with each other. Do NOT call me by my first name.”
TWICE. 0__0v

she is really a big person for not blowing up at him. I seriously wouldn't have been able to keep my mouth shut. lol
I apologise for not commenting before, but I've been reading and am looking forward to the next part of the story!

thank you for sharing ^^

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jurya August 21 2008, 08:56:40 UTC
hello there!

im so happy that people are reading my fics.
thank you so much ^_^

i love that two lines too!!!
i mean, he was a jerk and his hotness does not compensate for it..
go Yuri-chan! (oopps, i mean Tomi-chan!) LOL

im sorry it took me a long time to update.. i hope my updates will meet your expectations of the story..

i will be working hard! =)

p.s. i added u as a frend, hope u don't mind ^_^

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Hey there it's me!!! anonymous August 21 2008, 10:12:23 UTC

I just read it! What can I say I can smell that a love triangle is brewing already. *chuckles* Can't wait to read more.

I can can only imagine how you are going to make Ryo beg for forgiveness. I love it when guys learn how wrong they are... and learn it the hard way that is. Make Ryo beg! (too evil? naah he deserves it) Although I find it weird that he did not try to contact Yuri during his hiatus from Yuri's life (was it explained?)

I liked how you presented the character of Yuri. She is this perfect superwoman - extremely smart, driven, talented, kindhearted and very intelligent. But alas, she is just like the rest of us at the end of the day - an emotional wreck behind the perfect facade. (well an emotional wreck is a little too much but you know what i mean)...

Keep up the good work! I love how you weave the characters' emotions from both sides. (Yuri and Ryo...duh!)

Just one more question: Is Jin an original character?

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Re: Hey there it's me!!! jurya August 21 2008, 10:37:15 UTC
im so happy you took the time to comment!!!
(though i know i kept pestering u to do it in the first place..LOL)

*HUGS*

uhm, ryo refused to make any contact with yuri out of pride. u know how guys are when ego steps in. i mentioned it at chap2,perhaps it was still unclear?

ooh, jin is member of kat-tun, another JE boy band.. i'll acquaint you with him as well.. so that makes ryo,yamapi and jin as the JE boys that u know of. (yey! talk about accomplishment!) =)

this chap turned out great because u provided me with great (dramatic) inputs..

cheerios to you!

i love u so and i miss u a lot! mwah!
*sends u a kiss via yamapi*

hope u keep reading my fics.. ^_^

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mklia August 21 2008, 20:46:04 UTC
thanks for the updates... :D

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jurya August 26 2008, 01:17:43 UTC
thank you so much for reading! ^_^

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cigarettebutts August 22 2008, 07:48:57 UTC
pls update soon!!! i cant wait. nahh, your fic isnt too long, i love readin it! how yuri-chan's so strong!!

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jurya August 26 2008, 01:24:26 UTC
hello! ^_^

i was scared that pipz might not read this one bec its 5,500 plus words..LOL

thats why it means a lot to me that you took the time to read and comment.. thank you so much!

the next chappie is on the works..im hoping to finish it soon..

p.s. i friended u, hope u don't mind =)

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cigarettebutts August 26 2008, 05:38:19 UTC
dont mind! (in the yoko way) hahaa! sure thg! i love your fic! hope to read it soon!!! =DDD

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annafoe August 31 2008, 06:37:29 UTC
just finished the last 2 chaps. ahm... where's chap 4?

kei, jin and hiro... yeyeye! it's nice to see familiar names. its easy to associate faces with their characters.

st me when chap 4's up.

gambare jurya-chan!!!

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yuae September 24 2008, 15:09:46 UTC
I love you for keeping Hiro as a photographer. I want to read fanfics by other bishies other then JE so seeing him here made me breathless.

Pssfffttt.... Ryo!!!! *pokes him*

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