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Gift Fic for ryo_pyon

Nov 09, 2012 00:38

Title: Trails of Tears
Pairing/Group: Takki/Uchi
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None besides boy’s-love.
Summary: Uchi feels tired of getting dumped all the time. But when he meets with Takki, he suddenly starts to remember why he’s always choosing the wrong guys.
Note: Dear ryo_pyon, I hope you’ll like this!! I had so much fun writing it for you! And I loved your ( Read more... )

r: pg-13, p: takizawa hideaki/uchi hiroki, g: crossover

Comments 4

ryo_pyon November 9 2012, 02:32:08 UTC

SPOT!!!!

ryo_pyon November 12 2012, 19:23:45 UTC

Thanks you so much anon-san for such a beautiful fic. I especially loved that you wrote Takki/ Uchi since it is such a rare pair. And Uchi is so adorable in this.

I felt so bad for him when he thought
Being an idol means he can’t settle down yet. He can’t hold someone’s hand on the street, he can’t snuggle up to someone., but it's true since he's a celebrity.

Your portrayal of Ryo/ Uchi's friendship was spot on and I loved Ryo's reaction when Uchi asked him what would happen if he died. It wasn't a banal response, but still showed the depth of their friendship.

When Takki came to see how Uchi was, I loved how he tried to keep his calm exterior, but underneath he was genuinely worried.

Then the story unfolded and Takki was the cause for Uchi's suffering (kind of), but Uchi still loved his company. And after they realized that he had confessed to a different person there was that beautiful line. Does that mean that all these years he has been trying to get over something…that didn’t even happen? Or rather: It did happen, but not ( ... )

ryo_pyon November 12 2012, 19:30:36 UTC

And then this entire passage, which I can't just pull out a quote because it is so, so beautiful.

“What about now? Would you think of me as a possible partner for you now?”

“I don’t know, you certainly grew up into a fine man now, but…” Takki stutters, obviously taken aback by this question a bit. He shakes his head. “Uchi-kun, what’s this even about?”

Uchi doesn’t say anything, just eyeing the older one carefully. Then he decides he should give it a try, after all… he can always blame it on the alcohol later. It’s not like his love life can get even more messed up. He leans forward, using Takki’s moment of surprise and kissing him softly.

His heart jumps happily when he feels how Takki is kissing him back. He has soft lips… they are rather small compared to Uchi’s but so soft. And skilled. Takki knows how to kiss, definitely. It makes Uchi feel even happier.
It was so sweet how Uchi finally confessed properly and they had their first kiss which was perfect and sweet ( ... )

lilly0 November 20 2012, 16:21:42 UTC

Thanks so much for your awesome comment!!
I really really really really hope that you liked this!! ♥ It was so interesting to write this pairing (To be honest, I wanted to go for RyoUchi or KameUchi first, but then I figured that TakkiUchi is super-rare, so...)
I hope you enjoyed reading it!! *HUGGLES*