I THOUGHT YOU KILLED HIM. No worries - I haven't killed anybody .. just yet. ;)
Whoa. This was so intense, yet; it wasn't. You know what I mean by that? I know exactly what you mean. Emotional intensity, rather than a physical/action sort -- what I was hoping for with this chapter! =)
I'm so reading this again after I have to run out for groceries. Eat first, read later. ;) Have a good night, girlie! =)
HOLY CRAP. I was jittery until the end! I love this chapter; I think it might be favorite. No other fics I have read that have tried to do Tony have gotten him down as well as you! The suspense just might drive me mad, but I suppose I will have to wait until you update again; hopefully soon :)
*g* Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter -- I've tried to keep a balance between team members throughout the fic, but I couldn't resist one almost entirely Tony-centric chapter.
Wow - worth waiting for and my favourite chapter so far. It was pretty intense, especially the description of Tony's dreams while unconscious with little bits of reality seeping through. Gibbs isn't going to let him completely break, is he? Or is it too late?
Wow - worth waiting for and my favourite chapter so far I'm very, very glad to hear you say that as this is my favourite chapter posted by far!
It was pretty intense, especially the description of Tony's dreams while unconscious with little bits of reality seeping through. I found it an interesting experience writing a scene of emotional intensity rather than an action one -- opting for the former because it gives me more room to develop Tony's character/play around with his reactions to events from previous episodes we've never really seen.
Gibbs isn't going to let him completely break, is he? Or is it too late? More interaction between Tony and Gibbs in the next chapter that should (begin) to answer that; as well as some upcoming scenes between the two of them!
I love you! Seriously! I kept reloading to see if you'd updated...I finally got the internet back! Amazing. I have been lying in wait, the H/C junkie I am, and you have delivered with flying colors. I loved the flashbacks, the way you relate things to movies, the interjections with them trying to wake him up, the breaking that so makes sense and is heartbreaking. I can't WAIT to see what you do next!
*g* Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm a H/C fan myself -- which occasionally slips in during the action. You can count on more H/C moments coming up, for all of the characters.
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter - it's one of my personal favourites, as well! =)
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No worries - I haven't killed anybody .. just yet. ;)
Whoa. This was so intense, yet; it wasn't. You know what I mean by that?
I know exactly what you mean. Emotional intensity, rather than a physical/action sort -- what I was hoping for with this chapter! =)
I'm so reading this again after I have to run out for groceries.
Eat first, read later. ;) Have a good night, girlie! =)
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Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter -- I've tried to keep a balance between team members throughout the fic, but I couldn't resist one almost entirely Tony-centric chapter.
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I'm very, very glad to hear you say that as this is my favourite chapter posted by far!
It was pretty intense, especially the description of Tony's dreams while unconscious with little bits of reality seeping through.
I found it an interesting experience writing a scene of emotional intensity rather than an action one -- opting for the former because it gives me more room to develop Tony's character/play around with his reactions to events from previous episodes we've never really seen.
Gibbs isn't going to let him completely break, is he? Or is it too late?
More interaction between Tony and Gibbs in the next chapter that should (begin) to answer that; as well as some upcoming scenes between the two of them!
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! =)
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm a H/C fan myself -- which occasionally slips in during the action. You can count on more H/C moments coming up, for all of the characters.
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter - it's one of my personal favourites, as well! =)
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