Adjudication - Dentist!Verse - NC-17, Jared/Jensen

[thelonejuliet]

Title: Adjudication
Series: Dentist!AU
Author: thelonejuliet
Characters: Jensen, Jared, Kristen, Allision, Justin
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: 3,173
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Proper defiling of a dentist chair
Disclaimer: These people belong to themselves. I have no claim on them - just borrowing their pretty faces. :)
Beta: The ever-wonderful candygramme
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Comments

[indusnm]

Great installment. Go girls!
Jared is so good for Jensen...

[thelonejuliet]

Jared is amazing for Jensen. Don't you want a Jared like this for your very own? :)

Thanks for reading, sweetie! The next part should be up tomorrow-ish.

(btw, your icon? Looks exactly like my cat, lol.)

[angels3]

No it was not sucky but I really wish Jared would either move or kick Chad's ass to the curb.

Justin needs a knuckle sandwich and I will be happy to provide it.

[thelonejuliet]

Chad will get his due - I promise! Matter of fact, I already have it written. :)

Justin gets what's coming, too. Though I haven't written it, it's going to be wonderful!

Thanks for reading! *hugs* The next part should be up tomorrow...

[laminy]

Oh my god, I cannot believe that Justin showed up there, with the freakin' audacity that he did. Either Jensen needs like, a restraining order or Jared needs to kick his ass. Okay, a restraining order may be a bit harsh, but I don't think that Justin is there without the intention of screwing things up for him.

But up until all that, this was hot. I liked that; gotta always love the dentist porn. How I really really wish that Jensen was my dentist. All because of this.

[thelonejuliet]

Justin's intentions aren't really his own. *loves being cryptic* He has something to gain, sure, but there's more to the story. BUT. He will get what he deserves. I promise. :)

You know, this piece of porn, here? That was originally what the entire story was going to be. This was just supposed to be a one-shot, with sex in a dentist chair. And now look what it's turned into! *facepalm*

Anyway. Thanks for reading! Oh, if only we could all have Jensen dentists. Sigh.

Next part should be up tomorrow! :)

[iamthedirtgirl]

ain't nothin wrong with a little pwp chapter in the middle of an awesome verse, plus you ended it with a bang, well, heh, SEVERAL. But really, I love that you had them on this high that we all got to share and then whammo, the past shows again and it's more and more obvious he has very sinister intentions towards Jensen if he doesn't get what he wants. I think it was great. Course you wouldn't know to trust me on that since you never hear from me. But I'm slowly becoming addicted to the J2 AU side of fandom and while I comment on a lot of the other sides of fandom, like actualy spn fic, I haven't got my rah rah confidence for J2. (I just track any fic with a good tag and good story of course and stalk, then...POUNCE) Also, um, dentist terms were mentioned as running out, water pick(makes it less painless when getting teeth cleaned), sedation (the kind they do where they give you basically the date rape drug for people who are afraid of dentists and you go through and don't remember a thing after, I've done it, Ihave a high tolerance

[thelonejuliet]

Oh, honey, I totally understand your addiction. This is the first - and only, as of now - thing that I've posted with J2, but I find myself only wanting to read J2 AU's now. (Regular J2 kinda freaks me out since I have connection to Jensen, so it would be like reading porn about my friends. Not that I'm friends with Jensen, but you get the point. Uh...right?)

So, even if you don't comment often, I'm very glad you've been enjoying the story. It really means a lot to hear that, since I'm still finding my footing with this. (Ironic, since this is like the 11th chapter, lol.) Thank you so much for reading!

Thanks for those terms. I have a glossary that I look at, but it doesn't have everything. (I do have one story coming up that's called Novacaine. ^_^) So I'll keep those in mind!

And, you're right - nothing wrong with a little PWP. ;) Actually, this whole dentist thing was supposed to be a one-shot with the dentist-chair sex. Now look at it!

Sorry, I'll stop rambling now. But, thanks again! *hugs*

[keyweegirlie]

No, not sucky at all...just really made me crave the next part...oh and I still wanna slap Justin too.

*giggles*
-C-

[thelonejuliet]

I wonder how much money I'd make if I charged people to beat the crap out of Justin... :)

Thanks, Cassie! I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Sorry my responding skills suck, but the next part should be up tonight or tomorrow! :)