Adjudication - Dentist!Verse - NC-17, Jared/Jensen

Mar 22, 2008 15:00

Title: Adjudication
Series: Dentist!AU
Author: thelonejuliet
Characters: Jensen, Jared, Kristen, Allision, Justin
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: 3,173
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Proper defiling of a dentist chair
Disclaimer: These people belong to themselves. I have no claim on them - just borrowing their pretty faces. :)
Beta: The ever-wonderful candygramme
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jensen, justin hartley, jared/jensen, dentist!verse, fanfic, rps, jared, angst, kristen kruek, allison mack

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relativity1953 March 23 2008, 14:44:33 UTC
I don't think I have been commenting on this story nearly enough - and for that I appologize. I am so drawn in! I love the way you portray all of the characters, and yes, even the mean and nasty ones. Every story has to have a few of those - they are so much fun to hate.

I can't wait to see what Justin is up to. Does the boy really think he will win Jensen over by saying truly crappy things to him one moment and then giving him puppy eyes and begging the man to call him the next? And, I am sure that Chad must fit in there somehow as well. If those two get together to plot and plan against J2, heaven help those pretty, pretty men!

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thelonejuliet April 16 2008, 02:55:39 UTC
Oh, you don't have to apologize at all, dearest. :) I'm just glad you like it!

So, I just posted the next part - and you finally find out why Justin's been hanging around. He's just a bit...uh...confused. It's obvious that his parents have him on a short leash, so he's a little touched in the head. And spoiled rotten. So, social skills? Not very prominent, lol.

As for Chad...well...you'll find out.

Thanks for reading, sweetie! *hugs*

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luthic24 March 23 2008, 19:19:43 UTC
*squee!* New dentist!verse! OMG!

I get so horribly excited by this, it's...well, kinda sad.

And I read it, even though I should be sleeping, and it's FABULOUS! srsly. The plot/porn ratio was pretty good, hon.

I gotta go sleepy now, damn it. *sigh* Thanks for this.

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thelonejuliet April 16 2008, 02:57:00 UTC
Okay, so I'm sucking at timely replies lately. Sigh.

It's not sad that you get excited about this! I think it's cute. :)

Glad you liked this part! (Although, who wouldn't? I hope I never have a hot dentist...) The next one's already up! *hugs*

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thelonejuliet April 16 2008, 02:58:19 UTC
I just posted the next part! And GUESS WHAT! You find out what Justin's up to! Well, some of it. ;)

I can't tell you what's going to happen! It'll ruin it all and then you won't read! And I won't get these awesome comments from you! *huggles*

I love you, dearest. *huggles more*

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billysgirl5 March 24 2008, 02:23:44 UTC
Chad needs to accept that Jared isn't interested in him. Justin needs to face the fact that he ruined any chance he had with Jensen back in Dallas.

This was a great update. The porn was great. It didn't seem like much was happening in this update, but you're setting up for something bigger...so that was perfectly fine with me. I'm really looking forward to the next update.

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thelonejuliet April 16 2008, 02:59:51 UTC
Chad needs to do a lot of things, lol. As for Justin. Well. I think his parents screwed him up a little - you know, spoiled rich kid and all. :)

I'm glad you liked this part! And I apologize for my terrible replying skills, but the next part's already up! The 'something bigger' is in there - or, at least one of the somethings is!

Thank you SO much for reading!

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mre_quecky March 24 2008, 14:35:14 UTC
No, just really fine^^ Hm, though I hate Justin, what's he up to now?

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thelonejuliet April 16 2008, 03:01:06 UTC
I am so loving the fact that everyone hates Justin. Though I find myself trying to defend him... I should quit that, huh? :)

The next part's up! And you find out what Justin's motives are, at least one of them!

Thanks for reading, hon! *hugs*

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mre_quecky April 16 2008, 09:41:29 UTC
Awesome, unfortunately I've an English course in a few minutes, so no reading until like... later this day...

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