Dealing, Chapter 6

Jun 06, 2009 09:52

Title:  Dealing
Pairing:  Alex/Olivia
Rating: M (for some chapters)
Disclaimer:  I don't own the characters contained here, but I am thankful to have these wonderful people to play with.
Notes:  Itallics are thoughts. I apologize in advance for any errors in grammar and spelling.

Chapter 6 )

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svuiconess_70 June 7 2009, 02:40:16 UTC
Ok i was reading a nice foreplay here and found this (" The men were introduced and Alex bowed out to meet her boss for lunch.
"Meet me back at my office when you’re done. I’ll probably be a couple of hours but you can bug Rachel for the delivery menus if you get hungry." She waved as she left the detectives to talk.") in the middle of it and it just didn't make any sense. Am i missing something here?

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jtchaosaz June 7 2009, 02:56:43 UTC
Thanks for the heads up. I've been having trouble copying from word and it looks like something messed up. It's fixed now. Sorry for the rather abrupt transition. lol

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jtchaosaz June 7 2009, 03:07:08 UTC
Forgot my manners. Thanks for reading.

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svuiconess_70 June 7 2009, 03:12:20 UTC
no problem.

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