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make_me_ramenFrom: Naughty Reindeer
Title: Going home
Pairings/Characters: Gazette: Kai/Ruki. tiny mention of Uruha/Ruki & maybe Aoi/Reita.
Rating: R
Warnings: none.
Notes:
make_me_ramen, I hope you can find something in it that you like. and that you really like angst. merry Christmas! :)
Summary: Ruki is running after something. Kai is chasing Ruki's shadow.
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I really wish I had right words to comment on this. Because it deserves million words ..at least <3
it was fabulous, I was gapping when I finished
thank you for such a wonderful piece of writing
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HAHAHA!OMG!
But really it’s just that everyone gets a bit strange around this time of year. Uruha sways into the dressing room right after him and announces he’s a vampire.
now you TOTALLY go my attention, dear writer
“Don’t you mean a diva, a mother figure and a guy with a drinking problem?” Kai asks, although being the mother figure, he isn’t sure if he is trying to be funny or just going along with this for the sake of not losing his mind.
Oh, sarcasm here you, I missed you! <333 YOU MAKE MY HEART TO GROW WIIIIIINGS!!!!!
“Where is he, by the way?” Reita looks around and Kai wonders how come they all decided it’s Aoi because if anyone asked him, he’d say it’s all four of them (five of them; no one asks anyway).
AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OHGOD, OMG, THIS IS BRILLIANT!
“Has he locked himself or has someone locked him ( ... )
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WOOOW! You see? YOU needed to write this fic, so I could see Uruha/Ruki! \O/ AMAAAAAAAZING!
“Come on,” Ruki dragged him straight to the bedroom. His fists twisted desperately into Kai’s shirt, his lips were dry and hot and Kai looked down at him and embraced him. There was nothing else he thought he could do.
ohgod
It was like going two hundred kilometres per hour and coming to a crash at a wall; too fast, too hard.
200% perfection. A+
“Kai, have you considered piercing your lip?” Ruki’s hand is suddenly wandering over his face, touching his lips, stroking his cheeks. Ruki could have shoved it down his pants and Kai wouldn’t be any more affected.
Wow! I like fics that come with refreshing ideas! Mhm!
There is a ( ... )
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I think I really am the best at writing the crazy stuff, I get a bit lost when it comes to angst. I think I already told this story. but since I wanted this fic to be angsty, angst was neccessary. I guess there are multiple ways of interpretation, you could say it was all falling down from the very beginning [it's actually there in the sarcasm, if you choose to read it that way] or there is no exact point because there's no exact trigger, just different things layering one on another and wearing Kai out, or it's here: It was like going two hundred kilometres per hour and coming to a crash at a wall; too fast, too hard. all in all, I'm aware that I'm not clear enough sometimes, so thank you a lot for pointing this out. I guess I'm always trying to leave some openings but it's not always the best way.
personally I also like the first parts better. ;) thank you again so much. <3
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There are so many things to love here. The descriptions in general, simple and clear; this comparison he sunk head first like a burning warship in the middle of a battle; with no hope., so clever, so painful, and so perfect; the dark humor of Kai's thoughts Uruha sways into the dressing room and claims he’s the Snow Queen. Kai wishes spring would come until he remembers that it’s even worse in spring. Then he wishes he had a gun., at the brink of insanity, but always teetering on the very edge of it; the characters not just lost and empty and crazy (in a genius sort of way) Ruki and Kai, just trying to hold on, to keep everything ( ... )
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