Gift fic for chivakaza

[rocky_rudolph]

For: chivakaza
From: Naughty Reindeer

Title: Emergence
Pairings/Characters: Reita/Uruha, Aoi/Reita | bandfic
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: some mutual jerking off
Summary: It takes years of history to understand why Uruha and Aoi have such an on and off relationship.
Notes: I'm sorry this ended up being a freaking novella, but it wouldn't have worked if it was shorter.

Comments

[quarrions]

When I saw the pairings, my heart jumped and then stopped beating for like 5 seconds. I swear. I haven´t gotten past the header though. So this is just a comment for you to know that I appreciate the choice. A great lot. And even though I read the final note too, about this being more of a bandfic, well, I am sitting here, a stupid smile plastered across my face.... and I guess I better go to read now. Even though I already know this is going to be the best present and well, this year also the only present of this Christmas. Thank you.

[quarrions]

OH MY GOD THE LAYOUT!!!!!!!!!! Can´t go past saying this otherwise I turn very incoherent. It´s not a pretty sight.

Because he's young and he's curious, and he's entitled.
You just clarified a definition of youth. <3

And can I say right here and right now that I love your voice in here? Or should I say I love the voice of the narrator? And how he actually addresses me, the public? I don´t really remember reading such thing before when it comes to fics. D:

Let me also thank you for teaching me new words. Yes, I actually had to go and google "Discombobulation" D:

Stealing comes with jolts like these. It's why Kouyou likes it.
Oh, the thrill of it.... I would actually die of heart attack. *laughs* But I can see the charm of it.

They meet just outside the park proper, where the hill slope begins. Kouyou passes through the treesAnd THIS! I love it. I love when I can orientate in the space. You didn´t only created a park in my head. You created THE park. I can actually see it before me and I now imagine all the details, I have

[houseofducks]

Hi, this is your writer

[quarrions]

OMG D: you moved me to tears here ahahaha seriously, you even made an account to test this fic there ... it´s like ...who does even do that? put so much effort into writing for a stranger !!! I love you my dear anon <3333 Thank you so much. You have no idea how much this fic did for me on that Christmas Eve <3

[houseofducks]

LOL is it really that unusual? It felt very reasonable to me to create a new account... and the amount of research also felt very reasonable. :D Ok, so maybe I'm a bit OCD, you know, like Ruki with his clothes heheh... but I was really happy that I got to write for you (can't say more though, gotta keep the anon magic going) and I really wanted to make everything as good as possible

[quarrions]

Ugh, and yes this fic actually hurts so good. Just the whole interaction and when Akira asked if Kouyou wanted to and he didn´t even have to finish the sentence. And I guess in these situation, you usually don´t have to finish the sentence, but still..... I could feel the tension between them in me.

And he reaches over and Akira extends a hand and soon their clothes are discarded and they're wrapped about each other and trying not to pant too loud. And it's kind of strange, Kouyou thinks, how there are no kisses and none of the real intimate things people keep talking about, and yet it is the closest he has ever felt to another person.

This is so intimate, I don´t even know.... Woman, let me tell you one thing. Uruha and Reita are my OTP for long long years. And just ... to see them like this.... my heart flutters. Because I don´t get to see them like this too often. And I guess it´s also my fault because I am too picky, but .... thank you thank you thank you

"I suppose. I heard Nagawara say once that he did it with Kacchi and

[houseofducks]

You know, when you say they're your OTP and you seem happy about them being like this, I feel so sorry for not getting them together in the end ;_;

aljsdakjfhgfs I really feel like I owe you some more Reita/Uruha. Even while I was writing it, I was so concerned about the lack of romance and everything and I'm not sure if even I like it. *stomps on self*

Although, the fic does end at the beginning of 2004, who knows what happened afterwards :3

Oh, and the research..I love research <3 although most of it was spent on getting the release dates of their stuff right.

[quarrions]

You are crazy. NO WAY!!!!!! I loved that they didn´t get together in the end. Wouldn´t that be just too predictable??? Also wouldn´t that just be too perfect? That is not how things work ahahaha. Also I don´t mind my OTP not being really together together. I love seeing them interact with each other and I love to just be with them. Besides as I said I am strangely more interested in friendship than romance, so despite the fact that I do love them as a couple, the friendship is ... well it´s even base for their romance in my head so ... <3333 DO NOT FEEL BAD!!!!!! I LOVED THIS THE WAY IT WAS!!!!

So please don´t beat yourself over this!!!! I could have gotten anyone, yet you made the effort to make it all about them and my otehr favourite pairing so please please, be content!!! Though I won´t say I dont´want you to write more Uruha/Reita, I would be a, lying b, contradicting my own desires ahahaah <333333333333

[houseofducks]

I love friendship more than romance, too. You know, I'm really happy we see the same way on this. I'm such a sucker for bromance and you have no idea how happy your prompt made me :D Still, I'm prone to perfection and doubt so I was all weird about this fic, unhappy and happy at the same time. I still think there is much that could be edited about it, but anyway...

Ahh I didn't really mean a sequel. I really don't think I could write it even. I like how it ends, too (tiny confession: writing the end made me cry; due to anon I can't say exactly why!)
But I mean, in this Gazette universe I've created, there's still so much that could happen, like.. Uruha and Reita could end up together, or Aoi and Reita could break up, or they could become Uruha/Reita/Aoi ahahha... and Uruha and Aoi's relationship in the future could still stem from all of this. I suppose it's just that this fic made me think waaaay to much.

[quarrions]

AND JUST HOW GENIUS THE SUBTITLES ARE?!!!!!!!! just saying .... <3

Takanori thinks of himself as enthusiastic, talented and unique, and likes trying on new names for size.
Oh, why so appropriate? AHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA

And I swear I just love how much background info you put into this. It´s awesome. So awesome!

Kirisen
Ok, so this cracked me up immensely because it reminded me of Kirisho from Golden Bomber and that´s just ....UGH associations... AHAHAHA OMG lovely <3

OMG THE NAMES I JUST CANNOT!!!!

He's annoying, sure, but he's also interesting.
Actually, yes! I can see Uruha thinking this about Ruki. Being interesting. I kind of believe that Uruha´s personality requires interesting to keep him himself interested, so ...yeah ....

Ok, I officially like Takanori/unnamed person very much!

"There you go, then. It will work."I totally heard him in my head now. *laughs

[houseofducks]

ahahhaha I really don't know what I was thinking when I wrote that line with boob boat but I'm glad you like it :D

[quarrions]

Boob boat shall enter the history of Gazette fanfiction!!!! AWESOME!!! <3

[quarrions]

He could never call Akira by another name. Not when they are off stage. Not in their cramped apartment, when he needs to yell at him for leaving the tap running or drinking all of the milk. Not in the dark, when he's scared of thunder and he needs to whisper his name, just once.

But when Aoi appears, Kouyou has no trouble calling him Aoi. It's just something about him. He can't quite pinpoint it. Aoi is incredibly laid-back and he's funny and he's an excellent guitarist, but there's something.
AND THEN THIS!!!!! SO MUCH!!!
You killed it! With the names I mean.... and of course, I can´t even begin to speak about thunder moments ....

Ok, Aoi wanting to grow a beard threw me into a laughing fit and this time that was the reason for me crying.... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAH You know, I actually like facial hair.... but Aoi....with beard..... NO!!!! AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAH

a big bushy beard
First of all AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH
then OMG SUCH AN AWESOME ALLITERATION!!!!!! let me make nuzzle it!!!!

Kai

[houseofducks]

Ok I didn't intend to reply to every comment because seriously I don't know what to say even though they make me so happy. *chops own head off*

But I gotta ask about this Jojo thing! This is another thing that makes this surreal, btw, because it technically doesn't mean anything yet it means something to you! I mean, most of the names in the fic that aren't the GazettE guys were added randomly. When I needed a name, I just typed the first thing that came to mind (then I checked them all if they were actually real names, of course). The Jojo thing only, was actually, sort of, a reference to the manga JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, but very vaguely because I only remembered it after I wrote it. To be honest, I haven't completely thought out why Akira is allowed to call him that. As far as I'm concerned, this story is for you and you can make it anything you want :)

[quarrions]

AHAHAH omg you are precious!!! <3

Jojo thing...good lord, I am in a laughing fit again. Let´s just say that recently I met a guy, he calls himself Jojo and he is also kind of hilarious for various reasons. The circumstances we met at were quite funny too. He is from Mie too and ...yeah Just difficult to explain, when I saw the name there I burst into laughter because ...well because Jojo LOLOLOLOL

Oh, anyway, now I am curious about this mangaaaaaa

[houseofducks]

So THAT's it. It would be endlessly funny if the guy actually calls himsef Jojo because of the manga LOL
I haven't actually read it but apparently it features multiple generations and every time the main character's name can be read as JoJo and the original JoJo is REALLY unlucky.