Gift fic for chivakaza

[rocky_rudolph]

For: chivakaza
From: Naughty Reindeer

Title: Emergence
Pairings/Characters: Reita/Uruha, Aoi/Reita | bandfic
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: some mutual jerking off
Summary: It takes years of history to understand why Uruha and Aoi have such an on and off relationship.
Notes: I'm sorry this ended up being a freaking novella, but it wouldn't have worked if it was shorter.

Comments

[quarrions]

Ugh, and yes this fic actually hurts so good. Just the whole interaction and when Akira asked if Kouyou wanted to and he didn´t even have to finish the sentence. And I guess in these situation, you usually don´t have to finish the sentence, but still..... I could feel the tension between them in me.

And he reaches over and Akira extends a hand and soon their clothes are discarded and they're wrapped about each other and trying not to pant too loud. And it's kind of strange, Kouyou thinks, how there are no kisses and none of the real intimate things people keep talking about, and yet it is the closest he has ever felt to another person.

This is so intimate, I don´t even know.... Woman, let me tell you one thing. Uruha and Reita are my OTP for long long years. And just ... to see them like this.... my heart flutters. Because I don´t get to see them like this too often. And I guess it´s also my fault because I am too picky, but .... thank you thank you thank you

"I suppose. I heard Nagawara say once that he did it with Kacchi and another boy, though. Like a group thing."

Jesus, such a Reita thing to say. I actually laughed at this kind of response. Any justification is a good one as long there is one. <3

Dear author, you are so good to me. This fic. This fic. You don´t even know me, yet you are making me so so happy. Thank youuuu.

AAAAAND SECOND PART!!! AND I CAN HEAR THE VOICE OF THE NARRATOR AGAIN SO FUCKING CLEARLY AND yeah, let´s just keysmash for a bit here vfbdjkxgvnhdflgdf!!!!!!

Akira's fumbling with his new electric guitar
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Akira grins. "That could work. Bass only has four strings. I could handle four strings... I think."
This is called research. This -> <3 is called my love for it!!!!

"Sure, that's understandable," he says, but his voice sounds affected.
I am affected too! D:

And of course Akira is the one being honest to himself more..... Why is it Uruha always in deniaaaaaal!!!! Well, not that I know for sure it´s a denial in here. Since I am only like in the middle of the first part...but in my head if there should be one of them in denial it is Uruha, and for now it feels like one in here as well... *mumbles mumbles* I guess I am getting pretty much incomprehensible. SORRY. Can I blame it on your awesomeness!?

I like how Kouyou tries to analyze his feelings in this.

Akira hugs him, tight and comforting. He knows. Though Kouyou had never told him, not once expressed the crippling panic he felt when both his sisters left, Akira knows. Because Akira knows everything about him. And because Akira had to live through his father leaving, which is much more dire. And even though to someone like him, Kouyou's issues with his sisters could have seemed trivial, Akira showed nothing but support.
And here my little blinded fangirlistic heart squeals and screams: CAN´T YOU SEE HE IS THE ONE FOR YOU BECAUSE HE KNOWS YOU THE BEST AND HE KNOWS IT THE SAME TOOOOOOO!!!! AND HE IS ALL THERE AND YOURS!!!! *unf*

And you do this again, dear author. You take them and write them that way, that no one else can be that way and ... and ... and ...I am a puddle of goo....

Two days later, Rika breaks up with him. Kouyou doesn't even bother mustering up the strength to wallow. Instead he starts spending an inordinate amount of time at Akira's. They make music together. Akira starts wearing a bandanna over his nose. They drop out of school and leave their football club. They assemble a band. They disband. They leave Hiratsuka for the endless possibilities of Tokyo.
I love those short sentences in the finishing part. It´s so dynamic. Jesus, I love it. I love the style.

And then HIRATSUKA!!!! KANAGAWA!!!!! SHOUNAN!!!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!

*cries* FLAWLESS!!! THIS IS FUCKING FLAWLESS!!!

And then sweet denial comes in again...

[houseofducks]

You know, when you say they're your OTP and you seem happy about them being like this, I feel so sorry for not getting them together in the end ;_;

aljsdakjfhgfs I really feel like I owe you some more Reita/Uruha. Even while I was writing it, I was so concerned about the lack of romance and everything and I'm not sure if even I like it. *stomps on self*

Although, the fic does end at the beginning of 2004, who knows what happened afterwards :3

Oh, and the research..I love research <3 although most of it was spent on getting the release dates of their stuff right.

[quarrions]

You are crazy. NO WAY!!!!!! I loved that they didn´t get together in the end. Wouldn´t that be just too predictable??? Also wouldn´t that just be too perfect? That is not how things work ahahaha. Also I don´t mind my OTP not being really together together. I love seeing them interact with each other and I love to just be with them. Besides as I said I am strangely more interested in friendship than romance, so despite the fact that I do love them as a couple, the friendship is ... well it´s even base for their romance in my head so ... <3333 DO NOT FEEL BAD!!!!!! I LOVED THIS THE WAY IT WAS!!!!

So please don´t beat yourself over this!!!! I could have gotten anyone, yet you made the effort to make it all about them and my otehr favourite pairing so please please, be content!!! Though I won´t say I dont´want you to write more Uruha/Reita, I would be a, lying b, contradicting my own desires ahahaah <333333333333

UGH a sequel??? NOOOOOOO/!!!! ahah as a matter of a fact I love how this ends and I don´t really want to read more. I want them to stay this way ...it´s perfectness... also because it´s the reason and the conclusion to Aoi´s and Uruha´s relationship! <3

RESEARCH LOVE FOR RESEARCH!!!!!! *cries out of happiness*

[houseofducks]

I love friendship more than romance, too. You know, I'm really happy we see the same way on this. I'm such a sucker for bromance and you have no idea how happy your prompt made me :D Still, I'm prone to perfection and doubt so I was all weird about this fic, unhappy and happy at the same time. I still think there is much that could be edited about it, but anyway...

Ahh I didn't really mean a sequel. I really don't think I could write it even. I like how it ends, too (tiny confession: writing the end made me cry; due to anon I can't say exactly why!)
But I mean, in this Gazette universe I've created, there's still so much that could happen, like.. Uruha and Reita could end up together, or Aoi and Reita could break up, or they could become Uruha/Reita/Aoi ahahha... and Uruha and Aoi's relationship in the future could still stem from all of this. I suppose it's just that this fic made me think waaaay to much.

[quarrions]

Ah, aren´t we like that all the time? We think what we wrote is not really that good. The original image in our heads was different and there is always space for improvement, for changes, for editing.... I guess we shouldn´t beat ourselves so much. Because after all the reader doesn´t know this and he gets what he sees and just like that he is too able to find the points that are great, sometimes even author does´t know about them ....

So nah, I understand each word you said to me... but this was amazing. If you changes anything there...it would be entirely new fic. <3 So just save all you couldn´t do for next time. <3

Also yes, I am very happy to know that my sign-up wasn´t a pain in the neck and that you actually liked it. I guess it´s always easier to create something for someone when the views are at least a bit compatible.

Ugh, yeah..the universe..... ugh... I don´t even want to think of that. BEcause so much moreamazing probably could come out of it...