Comments | joyfulseeker: Crossover Fic: Couldn't See There From Here

joyfulseeker

Crossover Fic: Couldn't See There From Here

Dec 21, 2006 23:49

Fandom: Fall Out Boy and Panic! at the Disco
Pairing: Pete/Jon
Notes: For normalhumanbein, in response to her prompt here.

( Chicago is so two years ago )

my fic, my fic-fob, my fic-panic!

Comments 32

callsigns December 22 2006, 08:15:54 UTC

I am flailing at you as I type this. This is so gorgeous. This paragraph is the most spectacular part of my evening:

Jon twists his hand into the back of Pete's hoodie and hauls him closer. It's been a couple years since they did this, but they both seem to remember how it goes, Pete getting a leg over Jon's lap, Jon pushing at Pete's shirts and unbuckling Pete's belt. Pete raises his arms over his head and lets Jon undress him. The zipper from Pete's hoodie bangs loudly on the floor when Jon tosses it aside and they both freeze. "Shhh," Jon whispers in Pete's ear, and Pete convulses, trying to muffle his laughter.

normalhumanbein December 22 2006, 10:49:05 UTC

I should wake up to this every morning. It's gorgeous. And:

"Ooh, burn," Pete says. Jon makes a hissing noise, and is still laughing noiselessly, mouth open, when Pete leans over and kisses him, because they are both very far from Chicago, and sometimes Pete didn't think he'd ever get here either, and Jon is solid and warm and real next to him on the couch. Jon makes a startled sound but kisses him back, and Pete braces one hand on Jon's cheek, feeling beard stubble scratch under his fingertips, as their lips slide butter-slick against each other. Jon is salty from the popcorn and sweet from the soda, and Pete pulls away after a second to laugh into his neck.

you have their houses wired, don't you? You are transcribing their actual lives. That's the only explanation I can come up with.

joyfulseeker December 23 2006, 19:46:29 UTC

OH MY GOD LIZ. OH MY GOD. I JUST SAW "RELEASE THE BATS." I AM SO FAR FROM TRANSCRIBING THEIR ACTUAL LIVES I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU.

OMG

OMG

OMG

I NEED TO RINSE MY BRAIN OUT WITH BLEACH.

Um. I mean. This was not the comment I meant to leave a day ago. Thaaaaaaaank youuuuuuuu! I realized after I wrote it that, um, maybe you didn't want Jon? I'm sorry! But they just have all that HISTORY, and thus he got my vote as "Panic member least likely to be awestruck."

normalhumanbein December 23 2006, 20:55:19 UTC

There is no possible context in which Jon Walker is a bad thing. None. And I tend to dismiss anything on Release the Bats because a)I don't own it and have never really seen any of it, b)it's not like they'd film their actual actual lives anyway and c) you are much more entertaining.

joyfulseeker December 23 2006, 20:59:17 UTC

Dude, you shouldn't own it. No one should pay money for that thing, because inevitably you will find yourself staring at the TV screen as someone vomits for the millionth time, thinking, "Why did I pay money for this?" or, as I did, "I'm so glad I didn't pay money for this."

BOYS ARE SO WEIRD.

sobota December 22 2006, 15:21:28 UTC

okay, i gotta admit i don't really read alot of slash featuring jon. he's the bastion of heterosexuality in my brain. but when you stick ANYBODY with pete, i'm game. it's sad, really. so anyway, i read this (of course i did, you wrote spencer/patrick and made me believe it) and i was just like. you're pete, aren't you? or like, saw this happening and had to tell us, but you had to make it fiction.

that being said, amazing.

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 06:44:20 UTC

True enough, true enough. Of course, when your comparators for sexual straightness are, um, Ryan Ross, Spencer Smith, and Brendon Urie, it's not hard to be the bastion of heterosexuality (I kind of feel like that should be an icon catch-phrase).

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

provetheworst December 22 2006, 15:54:42 UTC

... this is just warm and happy and, yeah. ♥ i wanna curl up with this fic and cuddle it.

jon kisses like a straight boy and Pete whines, back in his throat, then covers his mouth, and Jon is laughing when he comes. and "you made a joyful noise" ♥
and everyone else falling asleep through movies. and red-orange-yellow lights & white living room walls.

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 06:59:08 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you liked the "straight boy" line, because that was one I was quite taken with, but figured most other people would skip over.

schuyler December 22 2006, 16:16:37 UTC

That was completely lovely. I could never manage that balance of introspective sweetness and burning hotness. Thank you!

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 07:29:23 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, and, um, particularly glad that you found it hot.