Comments | joyfulseeker: Crossover Fic: Couldn't See There From Here

joyfulseeker

Crossover Fic: Couldn't See There From Here

Dec 21, 2006 23:49

Fandom: Fall Out Boy and Panic! at the Disco
Pairing: Pete/Jon
Notes: For normalhumanbein, in response to her prompt here.

( Chicago is so two years ago )

my fic, my fic-fob, my fic-panic!

Comments 32

stumphed December 22 2006, 18:45:27 UTC

"Ohmigod," Jon says when Pete pulls away, "am I sleeping with the boss? Do I get a raise now?"

I loved it all. Especially the lazy tone of the whole thing, which I have a soft spot for, but that line was sheer brilliance. AWESOME.

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 07:31:27 UTC

Ah! I'm so glad you liked it! Oh, Jon. He is delightful. what? how do I not have a Jon icon. This is perplexing. OKAY FINE BRENDON YOU WIN.

gigantic December 22 2006, 20:11:07 UTC

You are my HERO. I'm going to take a page out of overloved's book and make a list here.

1. insomnia activites involving star lights
2. triple threat movie marathon
3. Patrick with a cold
4. throwing popcorn at Brendon and Ryan
5. Jon's little lisp!
6. Spencer the FAIRY GODMOTHER
7. bonding over Chicago, aw
8. just, you know, the mental image of Jon undoing Pete's belt with Pete in his lap.
9. Pete's constant giggling!
10. Pete whines, back in his throat, then covers his mouth, and Jon is laughing when he comes.
11 Jon kneading Pete's thighs, head on Pete's shoulder
12. And they're cuddly after omg! With laced fingers!

So much awesome. I love, loooooove this.

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 07:33:43 UTC

Eeeeeeeeee thank you! Pete's stupid-ass giggle is UTTERLY DELIGHTFUL, in my opinion. You managed to pick all these things that I really liked, so I'm glad that you liked them, too.

(PS WHERE IS MIIIIIIIIINE?)

mumblemutter December 22 2006, 20:20:18 UTC

"Shhh," Jon whispers in Pete's ear, and Pete convulses, trying to muffle his laughter.

This is so perfect. Utterly perfect. The whole thing is. (Pete is totally worse than Brendon. ♥) - A.

joyfulseeker December 24 2006, 07:35:23 UTC

Oh, man, thank you!

SPEAKING AS SOMEONE WHO HAS NOW SEEN RELEASE THE BATS, PETE IS SO TOTALLY WORSE THAN BRENDON AND WHEN I TALKED ABOUT THE FURNITURE STILL BEING INTACT I WAS SPEAKING MORE TRUTH THAN I KNEW OMG.

Phew. Sorry. I'm still processing.

mumblemutter December 24 2006, 22:56:39 UTC

IT'S OKAY I LOVE CAPITAL LETTERS. AND I FEEL THEY'RE WARRANTED HERE.

*stays far away from RTB*

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joyfulseeker December 26 2006, 23:53:56 UTC

Thank you! Pete is such a flirt, isn't he? I'm glad you enjoyed it!

overloved December 23 2006, 02:40:12 UTC

"Ohmigod," Jon says when Pete pulls away, "am I sleeping with the boss? Do I get a raise now?"

"Fucker," Pete says affectionately, then groans when Jon raises his eyebrows and looks shocked. Jon doesn't say anything, though, just strokes his hands along Pete's waist, presses his thumbs down Pete's bartskull tattoo.

holy shit yes! amazement and flailings!

joyfulseeker December 27 2006, 00:01:40 UTC

Thank you! This comment made me laugh, because I know exactly what you mean, and I'm happy it worked for you. Also, you've picked one of the parts I particularly enjoyed writing. Thank you!