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Fall Out Boy Fic: Call It Enough

Nov 03, 2006 17:00

Fandom: Fall Out Boy
Size: 9300 words
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Note: For sonstoodstammer for the damnyouwentz These Teen Hearts Challenge.
Summary: The trick with Pete was knowing when to believe him.

( Call It Enough )

my fic, my fic-fob

Comments 80

sobota November 3 2006, 22:56:51 UTC

this fic. is fucking love. god, i loved every little thing about it.

joyfulseeker November 4 2006, 00:28:47 UTC

Thank you! Oh, man, it pretty much consumed my brain for about a month, excepting that week off in the middle when I got utterly distracted by, uh, something else, so I'm very glad to hear that it worked for you. So glad.

one900 November 3 2006, 23:30:26 UTC

i just have to say. you're one of my favorite writers in this fandom. you can write like it's real and not, i don't know, not some crazy fantasy story that we cook up in our heads. there's just something almost tangible about this, the emotions and the words said and the situations. it tugs at my heart. i feel smiley. and inarticulate. but this was abolutely awesome.

joyfulseeker November 4 2006, 01:06:46 UTC

Oh wow, oh, wow, now I'm all smiley over here. This is such an awesome compliment to me, thank you so much! Oh, man. *flaily hands*

violin_road November 4 2006, 02:09:36 UTC

Oh my gosh. This is one of those stories that reminds me that I really, really need to make a recspage.

THIS. I just. TOUR. VAN. PATRICK BEING A LITTLE BITCH. *flails!*

If I was going to quote my favorite part I'd have to quote the whole thing, jeez. So good! So real!

joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 08:00:22 UTC

Thank you! I especially appreciate the realism comment, as that's what I tend to strive for (while wandering into ridiculous situations, yes!).

The thing about Patrick, to me, is that they talk about how he used to just flip out every once in a while, and how he and Pete used to have mad fights, and I tilt my head and think, "yeah. I can see that. Yeah."

i fixed it! ;D sobrellevar November 4 2006, 02:42:00 UTC

(i edited this comment just a little, but now everyone can see my happiness at/for you, and you don't have to be worried of anything XD)

Pete looked hurt, then angry for a second before he said, "What the fuck do you want?"

"I want you to fucking apologize!" Patrick said.

"Fine," Pete said. "Fine, fuck you, I'm sorry--"

"Fuck you," Patrick spat, "you superior son of a bitch," and spun away, walking so quickly to the door that his hand knocked against the cinderblock wall, skin breaking with a cold shock of pain in his knuckles.you write so realistically, so naturally. i'm sure it must be difficult to write such genuine fighting scenes, but it's just a show of your skill as a writer ( ... )

Re: i fixed it! ;D joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 08:04:59 UTC

Hooray! Thank you! You give me such beautiful comments. <3

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joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 07:47:54 UTC

Oh, man, can I just say that I'm very glad that you like the fic, and that these are amazing amazing comments?

I'm so glad the rooftop scene worked for you! It was almost the source of a tragic head injury, as I got instant inspiration for it in the shower, and got so excited that I jumped up and down and then had to grasp desperately at the wall to stay upright.

I always tend to get incredibly neurotic about writing, and I have this irrational feeling like the end result won't be as good without all the worrying, which is rather silly, I suppose.

ANYWAY. Thank you thank you thank you!