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Fall Out Boy Fic: Call It Enough

Nov 03, 2006 17:00

Fandom: Fall Out Boy
Size: 9300 words
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Note: For sonstoodstammer for the damnyouwentz These Teen Hearts Challenge.
Summary: The trick with Pete was knowing when to believe him.

( Call It Enough )

my fic, my fic-fob

Comments 80

xcarex November 4 2006, 04:08:01 UTC

I have this really hollow, hungry feeling in the pit of my stomach. I don't know how to explain it in a more pleasant way, but I promise, that's the feeling I get when I am completely absorbed into a brilliant, real fic. The kind I confuse with canon. The kind that shows work, dedication, serious characterization. I love it.

I can't even explain how memories's this is.

joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 08:08:29 UTC

Oh, man, thank you. I'm so happy you liked the characterization, and I know the hollow, hungry feeling of which you speak, and I definitely take it as a compliment. Thank you!

vanilla_alia November 4 2006, 05:01:31 UTC

i feel really embarassed to leave a totally incoherrent comment, but really, i just love this so so much, this feels so real and the way you've written everyone in this fic is so spot on and perfect, you just hit gold with your characterization et al.

i also enjoy that this fic wasn't sugar coated either, i really haven't seen many (any) fics that have any pliable maleness in their characters, i love how patrick and pete fight and tussle along with everyone else

such a great fic, gosh, i've mem'ed it if that's peachy, great job!

joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 17:08:13 UTC

Oh, thank you! Ah, boys. I kind of love boys being boys. They're so fascinating!

And I certainly don't mind being memoried, I'm honored.

eckerlilas November 4 2006, 05:08:03 UTC

Oh.

Wow. Just gorgeous and yay and I hate it when I can't leave worthwhile comments, y'know?

This story was so real. REAL. Pete and Patrick and Petey doing dumb things, but just trying to help and Patrick forever hating and loving him for it. For all of it.

I'm in awe of you.

May I admire you?

♥

*mems*

joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 17:34:44 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it worked for you and that you enjoyed it, and more, that you connected to it, and got what I was going for.

phillyword November 4 2006, 05:13:37 UTC

the whole last scene -- breathless.
great job.

joyfulseeker November 5 2006, 17:38:14 UTC

Oh, thank you. That last scene really needed to work, and I'm so glad it did, and also so so glad that my beta, callsigns, made me go back over it carefully a couple times. Seriously, betas, man. They're awesome.

canadiankracka November 4 2006, 06:26:30 UTC

God, that last scene is brilliant. I told you it would be perfect. And it is.

this is a test joyfulseeker November 4 2006, 14:00:53 UTC

to see if I can reply to comments through email instead of at the website, or if life just hates me right now.

(I had a dream last night! That I spilled water on my keyboard and inside my laptop and every time I tried to clean it up, I brushed keys away!)

THAT WAS THE SCENE YOU MISSED BECAUSE YOU WENT TO BED. Sleep. pshaw.