Supernatural: Post Shadow Codaish Thingy

Mar 01, 2006 19:00

Here it is! Read-through by stone_princess who is awesome as always.

Post Shadow Codaish Thingy )

supernatural fic, codaish thingy

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heatherly_sam March 2 2006, 03:41:31 UTC
Wonderful fic! You did a great job capturing Sam's perspective on things and the realtionship between the brothers. Thanx so much for sharing this!
Take care!
--Heather

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joyfulgirl41 March 2 2006, 16:57:57 UTC
Aww, thank you for reading!! I'm so glad you liked it!

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quietdiscerning March 2 2006, 04:19:50 UTC
Oh babies you just KILLED ME.

This is the coda I've been wanting, Sam questioning what he wants and the things he thought he knew but obviously doesnt...

Just this
"Am I your weakness?" he finally asks. His voice is low and scratchy, and he thinks that maybe Dean didn't hear him.

After awhile Dean nods.

"But your also my strength. So I guess it works out okay."
and this
All the independence he thought he'd gained in his time away flew out the window the moment he saw Dad again, and Sam thinks that he will never be a real person around his family, but he will never be whole without them.
And this
There is nothing left but a white, empty shell, but when Dean speaks, everything feels full again.
And THIS
Before sleep claims him, Sam hears Dean say, "I just wish you could be happy here."

Just killed me so much. Oh the love.

*twirls you*

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joyfulgirl41 March 2 2006, 17:00:40 UTC
Eeeeee!!!! *savors comment for a while*

This is the coda I've been wanting, Sam questioning what he wants and the things he thought he knew but obviously doesnt...

*squishes* *beams*

Oh the love.

*twirls you*

Eeee! Thank you! *twirls you back*

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amothea March 2 2006, 04:22:35 UTC
oh I loved this story.

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joyfulgirl41 March 2 2006, 17:01:48 UTC
Yay! Thank you!!

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amberlynne March 2 2006, 04:28:52 UTC
Oh man. That cracking sound? ME BREAKING!

I love all the contradictions in Sam's head. How he desperately wants to think one thing but his brain just won't let him.

"Am I your weakness?" he finally asks. His voice is low and scratchy, and he thinks that maybe Dean didn't hear him.

After awhile Dean nods.

"But your also my strength. So I guess it works out okay."

DEAN! *sobs*

I was going to copy more of what I love but the whole damn thing is a beautiful, beautiful picture of them and I can't just pick one line. It's so perfectly Sammy with the flashback and the not wanting to need but doing it any way and Dean just wanting his brother to be happy. *sob* Wonderful!

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joyfulgirl41 March 2 2006, 17:09:03 UTC
Oh man. That cracking sound? ME BREAKING!

*grabs duct tape*

I love all the contradictions in Sam's head. How he desperately wants to think one thing but his brain just won't let him.

Yay thank you!!! Poor Sam. He's very confused, I think.

I was going to copy more of what I love but the whole damn thing is a beautiful, beautiful picture of them and I can't just pick one line. It's so perfectly Sammy with the flashback and the not wanting to need but doing it any way and Dean just wanting his brother to be happy. *sob* Wonderful!

Awww! *blushes* Thank you so much, doll!!

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deirdre_c March 2 2006, 04:46:01 UTC
Sam thinks that he will never be a real person around his family, but he will never be whole without them.

Wow! What a purely distilled description of the crucial dilemma driving Sam.

*pets sore, angsty boys*

Lovely coda as always! Thanks!

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joyfulgirl41 March 2 2006, 17:10:09 UTC
What a purely distilled description of the crucial dilemma driving Sam.

*beams* Thank you!!!

Lovely coda as always! Thanks!

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!!!

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