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joyblue

Persona Non Grata

Sep 13, 2010 18:50

Persona Non Grata 1/1

Darkness shrouded Smallville as the storm continued to rage outside.

Lex ignored the chaos outside the mansion as the sound of thunder filled the billiard room.
His mind did not register the angry drums of thunder or the lashes of rain against the windows
as he hit the ball into a pocket.

His hand was about to grab the ( Read more... )

lex, chloe, oliver, rating: r, one shots

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joyblue October 5 2010, 08:19:03 UTC

Glad that you loved it, because it's for you!
And Lex's characterization is due to chloesilvers!
I wouldn't have been able to write it like that!

genki_geek September 13 2010, 11:32:05 UTC

GYAAHH! I love this! The characterization was so spot on, I could actually picture Michael Rosenbaum doing all the yelling.

joyblue October 5 2010, 08:21:32 UTC

Thank you! and credit for Lex being in character
is due to my beta chloesilvers!

sxymami0909 September 13 2010, 12:55:36 UTC

Awww poor Lex!!!! :-( *snuggles him* hehe great story :-)

joyblue October 5 2010, 08:25:55 UTC

Thank you! and I agree, poor Lex!

kitmerlot1213 September 13 2010, 15:26:28 UTC

This was wonderful-heartbreaking-but wonderful!

Lex really is this intensely loyal and I think he would especially feel any slight that Chloe went through in high school.

And I could also see him not being able to forgive her choosing Oliver over him. The pain that Lex went through in prep school is not easily gotten past, but I just wish he'd give Oliver a chance to show how he's matured and isn't that bully anymore.

Fabulous work on this fic :)

joyblue October 5 2010, 08:27:24 UTC

Thank you! It is hard for Lex to accept
that out of anyone she could be with, it
had to be Oliver!

brittany2922 September 13 2010, 18:25:21 UTC

Awww I loved this! I can't remember the last time I read a story with Lex where he wasn't written as the villian (my own stories are included in that) now I wanna find some more!

So heartbreaking that Lex loved her and she didn't love him back and then he still wanted to be her friend. Loyal to the point of leaving any womn who disrespected her in anyway.

I love your Lex!

Awesome Job!

Also glad you are doing well, I noticed a few days ago that you hadn't posted in awhile good to hear it's for something positive, congrats on the promotion, even if it is only temporary! :)

joyblue October 5 2010, 08:30:18 UTC

Thank you! and chloesilvers did a good job
in doing the beta! This Lex wasn't as good as what I did
before!

Liking my new job, I hope it leads to better and
newer things!