Persona Non Grata

[joyblue]

 Persona Non Grata 1/1

Darkness shrouded Smallville as the storm continued to rage outside.

Lex ignored the chaos outside the mansion as the sound of thunder filled the billiard room.
His mind did not register the angry drums of thunder or the lashes of rain against the windows
as he hit the ball into a pocket.

His hand was about to grab the

Comments

[smallvillefics]

Great job - the characterization even had me fighting for Lex, lol. How could you, Chloe?! *gasp* The audacity. ;)

[joyblue]

Thank you! I really am so grateful that chloesilvers
did a beta on this one, the original Lex wasn't like
this!

[judyku]

I can read Evil Lex, Perverted Lex, Hilarious Lex, and even OOC Lex, but you know what I can't read?

Heartbroken Lex!!!

I gave this one my best shot cos you wrote it, but it twisted my heart so horribly, that I had to run away!!

Your writing did what's always done and made me react emotionally, which is an excellent sign that it's a great fic. My brain was screaming "Leave Ollie! Leave Ollie!" Cos You wrote Lex so well and I just...

How could you do this, Joy?! This was mean, so horribly mean!

Boo to you and you greatness with heartbreaking fics :-D

[joyblue]

Thank you! glad that it can make you react like that :)
I really did a number on Lex on this one, maybe one day,
I'll write (and finish) a pro-Chlex!

[malugargula]

Wow really deep
I felt sorry for Lex
Great job